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The French Retourne

The form is written using four quatrains.
Each line of the quatrain is eight syllables long.
There are no other requirement as to meter or rhyme.

The second line of the first stanza becomes the first line of the second stanza. The third line of the first stanza becomes the first line of the third stanza and the fourth line of the first stanza becomes the first line of the fourth stanza.

Life germinates in the springtime, to blossom in summer's warm embrace. And then autumn weaves its death shroud, before winter snows entomb it. To blossom in summer's warm embrace, long days accelerate life's growth. And plants prosper under the sun, till shorter days diminish light. And then autumn weaves its death shroud, painted orange, crimson, and gold. For life can no longer flourish beyond Jack Frost's first deadly kiss. Before winter snows entomb it, life sows the seeds of tomorrow. And morphs into the memory of a moment that's come and passed. (French Retourne) 11/24/2015

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Date: 5/15/2018 7:49:00 PM
Lovely tribute to the cycle of life. Most appropriate title, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/24/2015 1:40:00 PM
beautifully penned Emile I have never tried this form:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/24/2015 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 11/24/2015 12:59:00 PM
Enjoyed the cycle of life Emile, A great write, beautifully put!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/24/2015 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Kevin, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.
Date: 11/24/2015 12:01:00 PM
You are such an adept wordsmith, my dear. I don't know how you make things look so effortless. Lovely....
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/24/2015 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I bask in the glow of your praise. Emile.

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