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my fingertips
touch ...
tender, but with melodic intent
you tremble
just SO ...
and sigh sweetly
the delightful answer
to my questioning hands
a gentle press ...
your supple curves against me
fitting me like dovetail
your quivers ...
soft-thrumming my flesh
matching your moans
the hushing pulse of your body
urges me on ...
your swan-like neck
satin beneath my hot palm
as it moves lower
pressing ...
deft digits dancing across you
like a wild Spaniard
we are ... one
our purpose, the same
oh, sing to me now
let my passion be your cry
let our lullabies of love and desire
move souls ...
and ache hearts
my beloved ...
guitar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/12/2020 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful choice for POTD of the day Greg! Music and poetry...a divine combination! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/9/2020 11:58:00 AM
My friend, congratulations on this gem making POTD! A truly excellent expression of verse, music , love and life... All four that so increase our joy of happiness and peaceful living.. A fav... God bless
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Date: 12/9/2020 7:52:00 AM
I love my guitar too. Very good Greg.
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Date: 12/9/2020 1:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg! Panagiota
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Date: 12/8/2020 10:36:00 PM
Bard, this is great misdirection knowing your signature style. Excellent love song to 'Lucille'. Music and poetry make a great marriage... I suppose it's best you didn't mention her G-string... I gladly pass over the potd mantle to a top poet... going in my faves. Blessings, brother
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Date: 12/8/2020 2:12:00 PM
"We are one, sing to me now- let our lullabies of love and desire move souls" Oh my !! Sweet music to make. Indeed. I love everything about this. It is so dreamy and romantic, beautiful in every way. I can feel the passion within. I wish to place this in my favorites. Congratulations Greg, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 12/8/2020 12:21:00 PM
Cleverly executed--congrats Greg on poem of the day.
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Date: 12/8/2020 10:57:00 AM
Hahaha... What beautiful moment, wish I can write like you about my guitar too :) I totally enjoyed this and a huge congrats on POTD...
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Date: 12/8/2020 10:21:00 AM
Awesome, Greg! A Fav Poem for me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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Date: 12/8/2020 9:49:00 AM
The "Spainiard" gave it all away Greg along with "soft-thrumming," "digits dancing, " "supple curves" among many other wonderful clues! Masterfully crafted my friend. I kept thinking this was an omage to your guitar and suddenly there it is was in your last line. Nice misdirection! Simply delightful. Congratulations on your POTD from one "picker" to another!
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Date: 12/8/2020 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. I must admit you had me stymied until the last word!
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Date: 12/8/2020 8:05:00 AM
Greg, so beautiful and congratulations on POTD with this lovely poem _Constance
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Date: 12/8/2020 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your p.o.t.d win. Your love for your guitar is like a best friend. I bet you make beautiful songs like your poems. Enjoy your win with blessings...........
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Date: 12/8/2020 6:50:00 AM
- Romantic to the end ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2020 6:18:00 AM
Wow Greg. Maybe you should think about getting out more. I guess with the COVID and all, never mind. Congratulations on POTD honors, well deserved...
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Date: 12/8/2020 6:06:00 AM
WoW! Greg, What a lovely poem in the shape of a guitar. I found this write to be so darn good. Amazing content and metaphors! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day. It is going straight into my favs:-)Alexis
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Date: 12/7/2020 2:04:00 PM
aha!! you did what I did a long time ago and made it be a guitar!!! LOVE this. FAVE
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Date: 12/7/2020 11:35:00 AM
and she is a plucky little vixen she is.....sensually metaphoric
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:12:00 AM
.... Gregory, your wonderous dedication did indeed elicit a big unexpected laugh upon reaching the final line..... Beautiful sentiment for your dear instrument..... Well written!
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