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Curse From Darkness

They came upon us in the light of day. No weapons did they need, for dark of night is what they brought. We still don’t know the way they darkened all our skies. . . in broad daylight! And after that, there came an awful blight. All plants got a disease that turned them brown. Plants are now just something from a longed-for past. We feel sun's warmth, but in everlasting darkenss we drown. We’ve raided grocery stores; food dwindled very fast, and just how long can candles and simple flashlights last? Some say the creatures came from under the ground, while oithers say they came from outer space. Large groups of us they never come around, yet humankind has not been hard for them to erase. Our friends are dying. Death abides in every place. Sometimes my starving tribe would smell something cooking. Had one of us been finding animals to eat? Some of us had candles; we went looking. Our search brought us the horror of ultimate defeat. Another group of people had consumed our friends as meat! The alien-like creatures knew us very well. Cannibalism (not by the creatures) is what this all came to. Such is the curse that upon us all befell. Sick from filthy water, we’re down to just a few. I leave this record of the dark deeds we’ve been brought to do. (English Quintain allows ababb rhyme with no set number of syllables per line) May 8, 2021 for Funom Makama's A Poem Of Horror Poetry Contest Chose Title is #2: Curse From Darkness

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Date: 5/30/2021 9:55:00 AM
Well done Andrea, well written and spooky.
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Date: 5/13/2021 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations On your win with this dark, dark tale. Terry
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:53:00 AM
Back with congratulations Andrea on your win. Tom
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Date: 5/12/2021 9:23:00 AM
Wow.... You have written this horror so well...Congrats on your win Andrea....much love :)
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Date: 5/12/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for this wonderful entry. I truly enjoyed your work. A big big congratulations to you.
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Date: 5/9/2021 6:24:00 AM
Brilliant horror Andrea, the stuff of nightmares. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 5/9/2021 4:47:00 AM
Your imagination spells horror of the worst kind when humans turn on each other. Aptly dark for the contest theme, Andrea.
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:23:00 PM
Talk about horror! This made my skin crawl Andrea. The thought of having maybe my neighbor munching on my bones is truly horror. But people do go crazy when they are starving. You took this to the darkest depths Andrea. It is a fantastic entry for the contest. I hope you have a beautiful Mother’s Day my friend. I got your birthday gift today and thank you so much. I love it! Love Connie xxoo
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Date: 5/9/2021 4:08:00 PM
hope you are having a fantastic mother's day too . thanks, Connie
Date: 5/8/2021 7:49:00 PM
Andrea, Oh my, an English Quintain so alluring. Your curse in cannibalistic caustic light of pyres abiding. I like a dark so thick you could cut off a slice. All for a special Mother's Day. -Richard
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Date: 5/8/2021 7:30:00 PM
Wow, real creepy to say the least Andrea. Good luck in the contest. John
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