Curse

everyone broken the devil is ban everyone cries, the devil is ban everyone is stupid kissing his --- he does not care for you, move on 12-13-13 SP

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/11/2014 10:35:00 PM

Hi Spring Poet, I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. I love how straightforward this poem is - the message is clear -move on, don't let the devil control your life as if he cares. Very well written. There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.

Ayesha Karim

Date: 12/30/2013 10:29:00 PM

This is a very short poem you could go so much deeper into what you want to say...

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 12/27/2013 2:49:00 PM

† First We Must Say, Nanu V Nanu: Or In English, Welcome, To Her Lovings PoetrySoup ˜ Smile, Don't Worry About Lou, He's On Our Heat Seeking Dank Black Hole Radar (- !BINGO! *.* Come Out Little Munchkins, The Wicked Trick Is, Gone.... You Shouldn't Mess With Me, I'll Ruin Everything You Are - I'll Give You Television, I'll Give You Eyes Of Blue, I'll Give Your Duck A Voice To Rule The World, Lol ˜ This Is Cool Poe Pointing To A Light Seeking Shadow Itself: Bravo, And Happy Holidays ˜ Love John

Johnny Rhinem
Date: 12/27/2013 3:14:00 PM

You see that's why I can't be on this phone while it's charging; because it slows the process and I have things to do *.* Just playing Lou, someones got to bust your balls right ? Get Up, quit startling the crowd....They, paid good money $*:*$ to see you defend the title ¿ Ooooppppsssssss, !B';'NGO! A one and a two and a three and a, FOUR ) ) ) ) .... SomeWherrrrre, Over The RainBowwwww o_O

Skat A

Date: 12/26/2013 12:10:00 AM

Hi Spring, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Syam Madappattu

Date: 12/15/2013 7:47:00 PM

Nice and fascinating

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/14/2013 6:28:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Spring ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2013 2:49:00 AM

Spring, awesome ending message... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@