George Aul Poet Rhyme

Cupid's Twisted Arrow

I gave you red roses,
I wrote you beautiful notes,
I read you romantic stories
and love poems with blushy quotes

I tried my best to keep you,
I thought I knew what to do,
but you left me sweet lady
for a "man" you call Sue?

I never saw it coming,
but I gave you my best;
now you and Sue can share
Valentine kisses and all the rest

My Valentine card ends
with a question just for you,
"Who leads when you dance,
is it you or is it Sue?"



Happy Valentine's Day!
01/28/2011

No, not autobiographical.

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Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2016 at 11:59 AM George, thank you for the reply. :) George Aul February 27, 2016 at 12:37 PM :-) .......... George

Susan Gentry February 25, 2016 at 10:45 PM Congratulations on your win! George Aul February 26, 2016 at 10:55 AM Thank you for the comment............... George

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2016 at 4:14 AM Wow a lovely rhyming poem George .. no wonder a great win.. big congrats! George Aul February 24, 2016 at 10:53 AM Thank you so very much for your always kind comments......... George

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 5:38 PM George, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA George Aul February 24, 2016 at 10:52 AM Thank you very much................... George

Royal Ninja February 23, 2016 at 11:14 AM Thank you for entering my contest it was such an honor reading:) George Aul February 23, 2016 at 12:06 PM Thank you for holding this contest............ George

Poet Destroyer A September 28, 2011 at 8:12 AM George, , I'm here to give all my old contest winners a late congratulations. Sorry, I forgot to leave everyone a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read every entry more than 3 times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem.. Honestly I don't like my contest winners with out a quick congrats,.. thank you,..p.d. the late bloomer

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 24, 2011 at 6:12 PM Congrats George on another grand win with this dazzling delight of twisted poetry my friend.. great entry ...luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2011 at 5:43 PM Congratulations on your win with your twisted poetry George. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley September 24, 2011 at 10:45 AM A very good write George. Congratulations

Dr.Ram Mehta September 24, 2011 at 4:37 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., George

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2011 at 4:09 PM hahaha,good one. reminding me of that classy johnny cash song I love so much. I enjoyed this one.

Doris Culverhouse January 28, 2011 at 7:14 PM so funny....or not??

Robert Pettit January 28, 2011 at 10:45 AM Good wording and rhyming in this humorous Valentine's Day poem.