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Cupid's Twisted Arrow

I gave you red roses, I wrote you beautiful notes, I read you romantic stories and love poems with blushy quotes I tried my best to keep you, I thought I knew what to do, but you left me sweet lady for a "man" you call Sue? I never saw it coming, but I gave you my best; now you and Sue can share Valentine kisses and all the rest My Valentine card ends with a question just for you, "Who leads when you dance, is it you or is it Sue?" Happy Valentine's Day! 01/28/2011 No, not autobiographical.

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Date: 2/26/2016 11:59:00 AM
George, thank you for the reply. :)
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George Aul
Date: 2/27/2016 12:37:00 PM
:-) .......... George
Date: 2/25/2016 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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George Aul
Date: 2/26/2016 10:55:00 AM
Thank you for the comment............... George
Date: 2/24/2016 4:14:00 AM
Wow a lovely rhyming poem George .. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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George Aul
Date: 2/24/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your always kind comments......... George
Date: 2/23/2016 5:38:00 PM
George, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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George Aul
Date: 2/24/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much................... George
Date: 2/23/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest it was such an honor reading:)
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George Aul
Date: 2/23/2016 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for holding this contest............ George
Date: 9/28/2011 8:12:00 AM
George, , I'm here to give all my old contest winners a late congratulations. Sorry, I forgot to leave everyone a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read every entry more than 3 times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem.. Honestly I don't like my contest winners with out a quick congrats,.. thank you,..p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/24/2011 6:12:00 PM
Congrats George on another grand win with this dazzling delight of twisted poetry my friend.. great entry ...luv..
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Date: 9/24/2011 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your twisted poetry George. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:45:00 AM
A very good write George. Congratulations
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Date: 9/24/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., George
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Date: 4/29/2011 4:09:00 PM
hahaha,good one. reminding me of that classy johnny cash song I love so much. I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:14:00 PM
so funny....or not??
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Date: 1/28/2011 10:45:00 AM
Good wording and rhyming in this humorous Valentine's Day poem.
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