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Cupid's Arrows Blush me shy when in her presence Distraught sore with apprehension; Reassure me with melody Soothing teenage anxiety. Planned our meeting, rehearsed my part I fear Cupid’s drawing the worst, Of the shot arrow’s blunt, lead tip Dissolving our relationship. Madly in love, I pray it smart From the quiver withdrawn the dart, With gold point and extremely sharp Hitting the mark that is her heart. Boldly, I take her in my arms Debonair dashing and kiss her, And whisper marriage proposal Then await for her betrothal.

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Date: 2/22/2020 3:23:00 PM
Loved the old style, well done Dennis,,,
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Date: 2/7/2020 2:50:00 PM
Hello Denis Spilchuk, you take her in your arms then give her a passionate kiss.Whisper a marriage proposal ...waits for the answer! She did not answer right away? have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2020 12:03:00 PM
You are welcomed Denis.Do you believe in angels? I do. Have a nice day my friend.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 2/9/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for your commentary & insight.

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