Cupid the Imposter

Cupid’s portrayed wearing wings

No angel shoots through the heart

Little devil causes pain

Should have horns and tail
 
 
 
*Dodoitsu for Dr. Ram’s “Winged Cupid” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Blevins Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Check Me Out! www.mabsjewelry.com! Thanks Carolyn...
Blevins Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn! Nice Dodoitsu!
Foulk Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 12:43 PM
well written, enjoyed reading this
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 6:07 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your win in the contest.Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Terrific read Carolyn.So deserved 2nd place.They never called or e-mailed me on the van so husband said we'll just have to save.Thanks for the help.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Guzzi Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 1:05 PM
some serious thinking here Congrd's on your WIN! Light & Love
Aul Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Congrats on a great win
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations to you Carolyn for your 2nd Place win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol
Beck Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Carolyn, short and sweet.....congratulations on this brief philosophical and funny view....Syd
Loving Iii Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 9:47 AM
your confusing love with covetesness.
Muzzey Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:15 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your second place win. Caryl
George   Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 7:36 AM
I knew this would be at the top of the list. Many congrat's Carolyn. Lainie
Mac Donald Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on your win!This made me laugh, Carolyn.:) Not depicted as a cherub here. Enjoyed your wit and humor. Best to you and yours, Mikki
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 6:06 AM
hehe, it is so much fun having a laugh at this one again Carolyn.. Congratulations on your win my friend, love Wilma
Mannan Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Ha Good one Carolyn.Many many congrats on this wonderful win.
Freeman Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 9:00 PM
Good to see you at the top Carolyn. Congratulations with this worthy honored second place. Agape, Moses
Horne Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:41 PM
Many congratulations on another big win -love this poem : ) Love from Jack
La France Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:17 PM
This is so cute, I really love it, congrats on your win, and thanks so much for your congrats on my win~~
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:16 PM
Michael's remark was fun!
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations on this too cute poem!!
Falotico Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:54 PM
What a nice place to be sitting , 2nd place with you... we should hold hands for this... love Michael
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in my contest, Carolyn
Blevins Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Love it, love it, love you too, Carolyn!!!
Freeman Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Haaaaaa! Yep, we should have soul connections first, as the standard norm. Smile, Agape, Moses
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Ouch! Great luck in the contest with this descriptive write. It captures with no exaggeration what it feels like when that arrow is aimed at the wrong heart for sure. Great write! Lay
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