Cupid Pulls Back the Bow

Oh, dreams that meet on magic summer nights,
And hide from hearts that never true love felt.  
A love that without slumber sees no light,
Affection that in daylight is misdealt. 
 
Do thoughts give flowers strength and will to bloom?
Or send sweet fragrance to a lover’s heart?  
For many years thoughts dwelt in hope’s perfume.
Awake, my soul that I may feel love start. 

Then, Cupid pulled his bow and struck my soul.
True love in all its glories came alive.
For in that instant I was fully whole.
And with you, dear, I knew that love could thrive.

Awake and happy, you, my dreams’ envoy,
For life with you has brought my greatest joy.


1/7/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Lovely write Dane Ann and congratulations...
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Charlie. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Congrats on your win, Dane!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Kim :)
May Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Beautiful write...Congrats on your win
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Big Smiles.
Dutta Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 1:23 AM
So sweet sonnet. I like it very much.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:44 PM
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for letting me know. :) Dane Ann
Turner Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Simply a gorgeous sonnet, Mrs Dane:) Just beautiful!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Thank you for this wonderful comment. It encourages me. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Hello Dane, I enjoyed this poem.I hope one day that the cupid aims an arrow at my heart with someone meant for me. one day.I enjoyed your poetry. Nice to meet you.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:47 PM
It is nice to meet you, too. Thank you for your lovely comment. I hope Cupid does targets you. Everyone deserves someone meant just for them. Finding them is the difficult part. God be with you. Smiles, Dane Ann
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 7:38 PM
Excellently done! I do enjoy a good sonnet!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:48 PM
I am so glad that you liked it and commented so I could know. Thank you. :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 6:36 PM
how you sweeten this day with this lithesome poem so well done, dane.. i like!..huggs
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your kind words, always. Hugs, Dane Ann
Goff Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 5:23 PM
Dane Ann! Magnificent! wonderful tribute of love! your loving heart is the sweetest on the soup! jimbo
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, James. I accept and appreciate your comments with great humility. After all, they come from a poet with a heart full of love, also. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
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