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Cupid, Pulls Back the Bow

CUPID, PULLS BACK THE BOW! I was walking counting petals From the daisy in my hand Thoughts far, really distracted Should have seen him in my path But I simply walked past Eyes down, mind blown Missed my destined one My other half, part of my soul But Cupid was there watching And as fast grabbed his bow Sent an arrow through my heart Made me turn, get back slow Then I saw him in the path He was looking right at me With a shy and cute smile He said hi, and conquered me I realized then I had found The other half of my soul Thank you, cupid, you captured him You were right, now pull back the bow! *** January 4, 2017

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Date: 1/5/2017 10:02:00 AM
Yay, Clau, good luck in your first contest! It's a great poem :) <3
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/5/2017 10:48:00 AM
Thank you!!! I've nothing to lose and it was fun to write! And you're my knight in shining armor! You're always saving me! - love you! <3
Date: 1/5/2017 6:00:00 AM
Really nice Claudia, good luck in the contest
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/5/2017 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Chris... I just revised it - I wish English was my first language! It's frustrating sometimes :( but It was fun to write and that's my first contest... - I just saw it and thought... why not? lol

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