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My first time ever trying the shape form. It was fun, and clearly I've got too much time today lol

Cup of Poetry

Fill my  cup 
                           with   poetry 
                              
                                   and 
                                           sweet
                                            lavender
                               petals     rinsed 
                                    
                                       with         
                                                love
  blended  with flavours of  empathy; a soothing 
 hot remedy  on frosty  mornings, when the  sun 
hides behind fogs  of  memories, add  a pinch  of  the       patience  and  a  spoonful of saccharine solace to   tea
lull the nostalgic notions lost in  November mists     of 
 flowing  across  moonless  skies  of   sorrow for    my 
  my cup  of  lyrical  warmth rejuvenates senses life
     as  coldness seeps  in while a  poet weaves
        hope through  verses  shaped  in artistic 
              lines    stolen    from    the   stars 
                  scattered across this cosmic
                                 canvas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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mysore Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:38 AM
steaming with beauty dear poet, lovely write. congratulations on your win. Cheers dear poet.!!!
Woods Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Lovely! I enjoy how you've left some sprinkles falling down into your cup. A cup of tea can right many wrongs! Xo
Kauffman Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 11:16 AM
A cosmic canvas, indeed, Inky! Every line is filled with your signature originality - "fogs of memories," "a pinch of patience," "a spoonful of saccharine solace," "cup of lyrical warmth." I am just in awe of your ability to create images then blend them into a poem that reflects your artistic depth. I feel so blessed to be inspired by your poems. Sending you gratitude, blessings and congratulations! Here's to more shape poems and time on your hands.
George Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 8:37 PM
The image of the cup of steaming tea so masterfully sketched on the canvas of your imagination is indeed beautiful. The content inside is more invigorating than the brew of milk , tea and sugar. Early this misty morning, it has warmed my spirits. Beautiful dear friend.
One Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 2:10 PM
No one will know that you actually designed this on your phone and that could no be easy.. you must have been very bored.. you designed it very well and the poem is also fitting to go with it.. thats why I guess it fitted in a cup.. nice shape designing dear poet..
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 10:55 AM
WOW!!! A creative/fun ~ write/shape. Love It. Guess you have way tooooo much time on your hands. Great Job...  Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................
Dosanjh-Johal Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 8:18 AM
I love this! So playful. Please keep filling all our cups with poetry as beautifully inked as this. Lovely alliteration and imagery as always. Incredible.
Kaufman Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 4:47 AM
You did again Ms. Inky friend! This innate poetic ability of yours is always such a joy to the ears.
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Awwn thank you kind soul i appreciate you so very much always
Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 1:05 AM
There is no poem when you write that is not excellent. Loved your shape. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:25 AM
Thank you so very much as always dear Victor, thats a very kind thing to say. i appreciate your support always
Poet Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 6:09 PM
Dear Ink, this shape exemplifies your limitless creativity. Whatever subject you choose to investigate, your abilities will always shine through. I was blown away by both the shape and content of your work. Brian is a huge fan of form poetry, and you completely blew me away with this one. The design was wonderfully constructed, and the idea you generated invoked the peaceful calm of a hot cup of tea. "Cup of poetry" was an apt and evocative title for such a great piece.
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:19 AM
That means alot because iv seen you do shape poems and you do them well, im pleased that you thoughts this is good enough, thank you so much
Pandit Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Very creative ink, my friend. Your talents shine no matter what you write. Much enjoyed the form and the contents, Ink. Brian loves shape poems.
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:12 AM
Dear Vijay your support is always appreciated, i think ive seen many shape poems too through his contests, and was intrigued to give it a go. Im so happy that you think its good enough. Always grateful for your support
Hind Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:25 PM
A fav, Miss Lovely! I read it more than once; it's beautiful.
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:04 AM
Awwn you are too kind always, truly blessed to have you here supporting me, thank you so much for reading and for the fave too. Truly grateful
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Wonderful work. These are not easy to do, and you have made it look like it was a breeze. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:03 AM
Thank you so much: yes its my first try, definitely wasnt easy, its my pleasure visiting your page too
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 10:00 AM
This looks similar to another poem of yours. The lavender part. But I probably have that wrong. It's cool how you included the pouring of the poetry into the cup. Very inventive, Ink. You are so creative
Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Ahh you know my words now haha. I was just writing whatever that just got in my head to just as long as i get the shape right. Was fun trying it. Thank u sooo muchhhh
Onpaper Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Fill my cup with poetry and sweet lavender..soothing hot remedy,on frosty mornings …Now I want cup of coffee ae!!!!! my cup of lyrical warmth rejuvenates senses life… I need rejuvenation!!!! as coldness seeps in while a poet weaves hope through verses shaped in artistic lines…mmmmm I am hoping for hope also !!! … that ending is beautiful papi aee stars scattered across cosmic canvas!!! Mmmm love that!!this is the perfect recipe to a perfect cup of coffee ae!!! When do I get to drink it ae!!
Onpaper Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 10:06 AM
It’s ok we shall have a cup of affogato together
Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Ahhh i dun drink coffee papi but sure lol you should have one thank you for the support truly
Anaya Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:05 AM
Warm and inviting, Ink. Great job with the shape of a cup, you are creative, the title is fabulous. I really enjoyed your cup of tea. Anaya
Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Ah i had to add a lil handle later on soup page, cause i did this on my phone notes and had to rearrange again lines here haha its so fun thank you so much
Silence Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:38 AM
Ahhh..I’m reeling in this flawless piece of art you’ve created, my beautiful soul sis! The words so comforting, the warmth exuding from your heart and soul..the imagery always so delicate, yet powerful! I can’t even choose lines to quote..it wouldn’t do it Justice..the whole of your poem has me swimming in its grace and beauty! Your heart mind and soul truly runs deep..
Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:16 AM
Wwwn you are tooo sweet my beautiful soul sis! Thank you so much always for being so supportive. Did u get now a cup of coffee lol
Culverhouse Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:38 AM
A cupful of well expressed words, I really liked the steam effect using words, very well done
Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:17 AM
Ah thank you so much i tried im so glad you think its good enough
Rhymes Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:30 AM
I have never written a shape poem . It’s very nice
Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Ah u shud try lol
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