Cultivation

Farmers cultivate land for food grains, Businessmen and Money lenders cultivate invested money for gain, Air cultivates Ice bergs in the sea of cloud for rain. Philosophers cultivate thoughts to see truth ahead, Scientists' experiments cultivate for results to be set for benefit. Writers and Poets cultivate inner sense for something to express, Judges cultivate Law in courts to feed reasonable justice. By the way or on the way all cultivate something for only needs In this World, Cultivation always certainly feeds. For contest: Any poem any subject

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/30/2017 8:43:00 PM

The meaning and how you crafted it is very heartfelt. You write with an ease that is lovely to read your message so beautifully felt and expressed. a fave, 7+ this is fun reading your oldies :-) you entered contests too, maybe try again, you are an incredibly gifted poet. many blessings to you :-)

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 5/14/2014 12:35:00 AM

Nicely done. Good insights.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/14/2014 5:09:00 AM

Thanks a lot my poet friend for reading my featured poem and for your comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 9:38:00 PM

Hello BL, ... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/14/2014 5:08:00 AM

Thanks a lot my best friend for reading my featured poem and for your comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2013 11:41:00 PM

this is a nice one I found way back at the very beginning of your writing here, BL.

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/7/2013 9:14:00 AM

Many thanks for commenting on my old poem. Loved always, bl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2011 12:29:00 PM

helping you get rid of the I Don't Know ;) These would be Couplet form..BUT you have not laid it out that way. Line 1 ends with grains, line 2 should end with gain..that's your first COUPLET, line 3 ends with rain [so you need an extra line for line 4..with the same rhyme ain,ane,ein, or aign..all work! Line 5 should end ahead, and line 6 should end in benifit [this loose rhyme is called half-rhyme or slip rhyme] line 7 end in express, line 8 in justice..line 9 in needs line 10 in feeds and then you would have a proper COUPLET form! Light & Love

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/15/2011 7:56:00 AM

Thanks you for your help and I will do indeed after sometime. I love much who shows me the right way in spheres where life deserves to rest. Thanks, my friend. bl