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Culmination of a Dream

Why did all the lights go out? There’s not even stars or a moon in the night sky! I have never witnessed a darker night before. I had the sensation of being blind for the first time in my life. This was total darkness that had enveloped me. I had my girlfriend’s hand and tried to hold onto it as much as I could. She could no longer stand or walk. Somehow, I pulled her along almost effortlessly as if she had no mass or weight of her own. I said to her, “Don’t worry, I have a hold of you and I won’t let you go”. However, she emitted no response to my words. I had her hand in mine, but it was as if she was not with me. Did the rest of her just vanish into nothingness? Darkness and silence; what an unsettling combination this was! My situation and surroundings filled me with ambivalence and consternation. Suddenly, I heard a faint and steady humming noise emanating from something distant. From out of the houses on the street came other people dressed in white. I called out to them, but none appeared to hear me or be able to respond. Each individual seemed to be headed in the same direction. Blindly, they all walked toward what must have been the source of the humming sound. I still had my girlfriend’s hand, but no trace of anything else was with me. Then I could see the people in front of me just dropping out of sight as if they were falling off a cliff. I tried to turn around and go back the other way, but the ones behind me pushed me to go forward. Any attempt to stand and hold my ground was fruitless as these strangers kept pushing me. I then felt myself falling. When I awoke, I found myself on the floor of my bedroom. My girlfriend was there telling me to stop snoring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert in Matt's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:54:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your big win in the Finish the Dream contest.. my friend.. super cool luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:38:00 AM
tickling me all the way.. congrats to you, robert! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:53:00 PM
Haha The end was good. Loved it.many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/23/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win~~
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:59:00 PM
A great job Robert on your worthy poem's near the top honor. Congratulations on your seventh place honor .Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:09:00 PM
The last sentence makes me smile!! Such excitement in the dream....but you took us along for the ride! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:07:00 PM
Great story, Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/23/2011 1:12:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of John, Robert
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your very fine win in Matt's Contest, Robert! I enjoyed this so! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:59:00 AM
Funny how you can dream a whole sequenc of things in a few seconds. Great writing and win. Love, Joyce
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