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Cuddles

Perhaps I was half asleep.
I always felt drowsy at night.
I sensed her warm body snuggling near me.
She put her head on my shoulders.
Her cuddles sent me to seventh heaven.
I only hoped she did not mind
The stubble on my unshaven face.
Still I was elated when as I felt
Her smooth downy face next to mine.
How fragrant was her exquisite hair,
I guessed it resembled a Soleil Neige,
An elegant and mesmerising perfume.
I took a deep breath, indulging 
In its fruity nectar…so I opened my eyes.
Only to see an empty bed and a lumpy pillow.
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Mccann Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 7:36 PM
It was the stubble that did it for me, the earthiness and unadorned intimacy. I am sorry for your pain but you must have had true beauty. Elizabeth
Seeker Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Beautiful dream while it lasted! Shifting attention gently within, we feel love’s ethereal embrace humming within our radiant heart
Poet Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 4:00 PM
Following your verses of elegance and compassion, there were sobs. The expression of feeling is at the heart of poetry, and this passage does just that. You have consistently been an outstanding writer. Having the opportunity to look at such magnificent poetry was a privilege. Wishing you a pleasant evening. Stay protected and know that you are in my thoughts and prayers at this time and always.
Skelly Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Perfume/fragrances always set in motion memories. Nostalgic write...Delice
Edmonds  Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 12:56 AM
Only in dreams, in beautiful dreams. So sad for you Victor, memories keep your loved one in heart and mind, all of the time. Lovely free verse, keep well… Belle
Lawrence Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 9:40 PM
I was taken away by your words … sweet lovely imagery and the scent of your loved one . Beautiful Victor . Sad and lovely all at once . Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Horsman Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 8:34 PM
So sad Victor, having to learn how to live without a love one. Love your poem, it brings home the certainly of it.
Buehler Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 9:47 AM
This tale of a sweet dream was written with beauty and passion, Victor. It is in my faves. Blessings, Evelyn
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 1:36 AM
What a lovely dream. From this kind you hate waking up. This was such a romantic poem Victor. I have had three wonderful dreams about my husband after he passed on. They keep me going. Blessings xxoo
George Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:39 PM
There's a passionate lover in you .. dear Victor. What a beautiful romantic poem ! At least in dreams one can enjoy such moments, though facing the sad reality on waking up is sad!Let the memories of such beautiful moments, once you had help you to live on....
Tor Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Victor wow. This is a favorite. What an incredible theme. It is sad and wonderful. Wonderful to read the ending that you were dreaming and it was a genius part of the Poem you have created. Sad because you were disappointed and it was merely a dream, or wishful thinking in your tired state of mind. I love this. A POTD contender I feel. Exceptional and clever!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:28 AM
A beautiful write. A touch of heaven until you realize your still on earth. Aww…hugs.
Ricci Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:08 AM
Victor Victor Victor - Words of beauty and passion and then the tears. Poetry is all about emotion and this entry has it. Always are you a marvelous writer. It was an honor seeing this this morning. Have a wonderful night. Love and Blessings now and always (smile) Please remain safe.
Fowler Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:02 AM
It's wonderful you still have such pleasant dreams of cuddles Victor. It would be a great loss if you had none. Linda
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Sad but true to real life--when missing someone! Very emotive write, Victor.
Roper Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:45 AM
Sad, but our dreams tend to bring back memories of those we miss. Hugs my dear friend
M  Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 2:49 AM
A Very sad Poem Victor written so well ! I’m sorry you feel such loss. Debx
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 2:27 AM
Ohhhh!! Sad one. I guess a good dream anyway. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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