Crystal Waterfall

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Translucent waterfall at the verge of the beach,
Natural sensation, drowsy summertime's peach,
Perpetually in motion, like the hands of a clock,
Terminating soon in a dazzling freshness shock!

Beautiful day scene, veiled in shades of green,
A sparkling jewel at sunset, or in gilded gleam,
And my heart will recollect, well after the sight,
Of cascading coldness rushing, resembling flight.

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Date: 12/21/2021 6:47:00 PM
Hello Evelyn ... another beaut picture poem with vivid details. Well don Evelyn - Lindsay
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2021 7:22:00 PM
Hello Lindsay, Thank you for the fine compliment.
Date: 12/19/2021 8:35:00 AM
Another fine poem with exquisite imagery. You work so well with nature, it's easy to feel present in your poetry. Waterfalls have always been enchanting to me and this is a lovely presentation through poetry of a waterfall experience. Thank you for sharing, Evelyn. I admire your gift of poetry. Your friend, Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/19/2021 10:11:00 AM
I'm so delighted with your kind remarks about this work, Bill. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Date: 12/17/2021 5:08:00 AM
Evelyn, super imagism infused with living emotion. Hoping you have a marvelous Christmas!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/17/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sally. Happy holidays!
Date: 12/16/2021 6:56:00 PM
Yes like the comments below, i feel also, the waterfall steeped within the poem, truly lovely and a joy to read.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/16/2021 7:06:00 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your appreciation, Harry. :)
Date: 12/16/2021 9:57:00 AM
I love waterfalls as you know from my poems. Great imagery. Yuletide greetings.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/16/2021 11:20:00 AM
It's great to see the beautiful cascade when the weather's hot. Thanks so much for your thoughts. Blessings.
Date: 12/16/2021 7:27:00 AM
Hello, Evelyn. Nicely crafted poem; I easily envision it in my imagination and felt as if I had been there by myself. I enjoyed the depiction.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/16/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for your inspiriting remarks, Lasaad. Hope your day is a great one. :) Evelyn
Date: 12/15/2021 10:10:00 PM
Hi Evelyn….beautifully written …I could see it in mind and wanted to be there. Thankyou for my time at the waterfall Ha! Debx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/16/2021 11:27:00 AM
Hi Deb, you are very welcome. Thank you for joining me at the waterfall, and for your lovely remarks.
Date: 12/15/2021 6:52:00 PM
Your waterfall has 'hearts a-flutter' everywhere, Evelyn. Wonderful write. ~ Cascade in Jade
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/15/2021 8:15:00 PM
Sure glad you delighted in it, Gershon. Thanks for letting me know. ~ Glitter and Sparkle
Date: 12/15/2021 5:28:00 PM
Beautiful image of a falling cataract that comes into our sight sending cascading thrill in our hearts. Loved the description Evelyn!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/15/2021 8:17:00 PM
You have my deepest thanks for your complimentary remarks, Valsa.
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