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Crystal Treasures

sky pours down crystals quench parched lands* now yielding treasures... abounding grain harvests watered freely by heavenly grace enrich resources' sharing. *Deuteronomy 28:12 The LORD shall open unto thee his good treasure, the heaven to give the rain unto thy land in his season, and to bless all the work of thine hand: and thou shalt lend unto many nations, and thou shalt not borrow. October 23, 2021 6th place, "Lune (Mixed Pair)" Haiku Poetry Writing Premier Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula; judged on 10/28/2021.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2021 10:36:00 AM

Beata, a bounty of graceful images flows from your lovely Lune enriching us like rain! Congratulations on your win! Bountiful blessings to you. You really captured the essence of this scripture and reminds me of Ps. 65 - "the hills wreathed in happiness," "pastures rich in blessing," "meadows clothed with sheep," "valleys mantled in corn" that break into song. What a beautiful song of joy! Congratulations and blessings.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/28/2021 10:35:00 PM

Beautiful work of the blessings of God.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/28/2021 8:37:00 PM

Congratulations, Beata, for your excellent win in William’s contest with you beautiful poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Ann Peck

Date: 10/28/2021 9:26:00 AM

Oh Beata, How lovely: "Sky pours down crystals." I can verify they're crystals to those of us in the Southwest :) Congratulations on your high placement!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2021 5:21:00 AM

Beautifully penned Beata, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/28/2021 4:40:00 AM

Beata, you are righteously versed by the Grace above with this blessed Lune my friend, my compliments for your placement, and the peace in your heart, Aloha!