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Crystal and Dust, Daily 24

24:Drops of color splinter from the crystal’s sharp edges-- From the hard clearness, Blue splays Orange dances Green jumps Purple plays As yellow mellows Down the hot day. Even through the dust that filters light’s passage, Rainbow’s essence delights the ceiling. Beams win against a decade of unwashed window.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2012 2:44:00 PM
Fascinating and image provoking piece. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 4/24/2012 6:50:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured.I enjoyed....Patrick
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Date: 4/24/2012 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Autumn. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2012 8:53:00 PM
I like the principal image but it feels a bit rough. The sudden jumps in lines 8 and 10 prove jarring and disorienting.
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