Crystal

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Crystal loves her dolls They lay upon her bed Some stand on the walls Where she keeps them fed Her smiles are filled with love And I could never imagine another God could have sent from up above Who would be such a good mother She gifts my heart with joy That only God could send Never once the tomboy But always the sweetest friend I welcome the moments with her This child who captured my heart There are always things to confer Sweet memories to try and impart This girl is the sweetest child That has graced my world She’s so honest and mild With hair that is beautifully curled October 31, 2019 2 to 12 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beth Evans

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Na Na

Date: 11/22/2019 12:35:00 AM

Congrats on your winning poem Gina

Ann Foster

Date: 10/31/2019 5:06:00 PM

Lovely, truly. Ann

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/31/2019 4:46:00 PM

Such a lovely piece Gina, penned with super rhyme and flow making it a joy to read. Blessings and prayers, Gordon

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/31/2019 4:21:00 PM

I wish I knew if I were reading fact or fiction! The poem is a sweet maternal embrace delivered via word imagery laden with uplifting feel - it is tender and timeless. Good luck in the contest and all else, sweet sister. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Lu Loo

Date: 10/31/2019 10:52:00 AM

awww! How sweet is Crystal! And wow, that beautiful name...well done with this winner RR :)-luloo

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/31/2019 10:48:00 AM

Regina, Love this Rhyme in curls ans smiles. Happy Halloween! -Richard

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/31/2019 10:41:00 AM

sounds like you both have been blessed...a beautiful poem for her and a gorgeous write and entry for the contest, best wishes for you my sweet friend! Hugs and love...