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Pick-A-Title Vol 47 Contest by Ed Ibeh ~ 12/1/24

Deep in fathomless shadows I weep with woeful sighs. My heart, once so innocent, I have come to despise, and with each tear I cry for wrongs I have committed, I find myself unworthy of mercy; unfit to be acquitted. A broken promise is a grievous offense of a serious kind. I charge myself with the crime that can only be defined as one that now gives me the burden of carrying the pain of wounds on my odious soul that I abhor and disdain. I spun a wicked web of deceit when a friendship I defiled. Broke a trust as if the devil tickled my ear; I was beguiled. I wove a tapestry sewn with lies, words I shouldn't have said. I'm wrought with torment, forgiveness dangling by a thread. In penumbras of solitude, I hang my head in wretched despair. No cry for mercy will I beg. The suffering is mine alone to bear. I will remain veiled in the vestiges of transcendent invisibility, without expectation of empathy. I live in a state of culpability. It was a twisted path I walked, and I must carry all the blame for in the act of betraying my friend, I am drowning in shame. The boundary line between revenge and mercy is very narrow. I fear I'll not be forgiven if my field of benevolence lies farrow. Each night I wake in nightmare's bed, my body feeling chill. In haunting silence around me I hear my heart beating until I curse myself for turning away from a friendship I spurned, for in the fanned flames of what we shared, I was also burned.

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Date: 12/12/2024 2:32:00 AM
Very powerful poem in expressing humility and simple-mindednes in a very convincing way. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/21/2024 12:47:00 PM
Thank you very much, Chris.
Date: 12/11/2024 4:20:00 PM
Lin, heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this soul-bearing, brilliant poem. I get the feeling writing this was therapeutic for you. Great job!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/12/2024 1:45:00 AM
Thank you very much, Edward. I always enjoy participating in your contests.
Date: 12/3/2024 5:36:00 AM
Lin, I'm seeing no comments here yet. Yet, this could apply to many people. We might carry these sentiments for a long time as memories. Personally, I try to apologize for something done about which I ruminate with discomfort. Sometimes, however, that's impossible since we can't find the person we've hurt. Then, we can only adjust our own relationship to a memory by forgiving ourselves and acting better in the present. Many could benefit from reading this.
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Date: 12/3/2024 5:41:00 AM
Morning, Duke. Yours are the only comments, and if they're the only ones this one gets, that's good enough for me. It's a weight we carry when we've hurt someone, especially if it's a friend. Forgiveness is not always easily given but hoped for in the end. Thank you for supporting me.

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