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Crying In the Rain

Been living like a train, running on a drawn line. Drinking too much wine, to fight all the pain. Tears fall like rain Under despair's reign. And I search for a sign, that will show me all's fine. I don't want to whine, but I got no place to dine. I'm too far across the line, I cant even feel the pain. Been down every lane, there's nothing left to be seen. I'm a lion without its mane, just waiting to be slain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/22/2015 11:03:00 AM
Beautiful! Can feel your words, congratulations on your win!??
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:12:00 AM
Impressive and emotive, congratulations!
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:22:00 PM
JYOTHIS, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like. Enjoy your win, LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:17:00 PM
Jyothis, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:25:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Jyothis - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:57:00 PM
Jyothis, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Jyothis Lal
Date: 1/4/2015 4:57:00 AM
Thank you for the support. means a lot :)
Date: 1/2/2015 7:00:00 PM
deep heartbreaking write:-( Hugs jan xx
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Jyothis Lal
Date: 1/4/2015 4:58:00 AM
Hey! thank you :D

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