Crying Shirt

It hung in the closet
long after he was gone
the scent of his cologne 
lingering there
The cuffs were worn and shabby
Colors faded from the sun
I would pack it with the other things
his watch and silver cuff links
memories from the past
I could not part with
As I started to gently fold it
the tears I had held back
now came pouring down my cheeks
like salty rain
I buried my face in the faded shirt
long after he was gone
and the scent of his cologne
still lingered there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 9/20/2009 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/19/2009 1:56:00 PM
Just wanted to drop in and add congratulations on having this well written poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 9/17/2009 7:44:00 PM
Love the title to this poignant write ... I just went and bought a bottle of his cologne and opened the top every once in awhile ... smile ... Then our son took it off with him when he moved out ... LOL ... and so on life goes and thanks so much for this beautiful poem, Neva. Its a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at PoetrySoup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 9/17/2009 1:33:00 PM
I love the emotion you describe in this poem.This is such a typical description of a lost relationship.
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Date: 9/17/2009 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations friend, on having your poem featured this week. Please keep writing. Great you! Adeleke
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:47:00 AM
Neva, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:45:00 PM
sadly done, congrats on being a featured poet!
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Neva. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2009 12:30:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in an honest and heartfelt way. I think most, having suffered their own losses, will relate to this poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:01:00 PM
thanks to everyone for your comments--much appreciated!
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:55:00 AM
Neva, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/27/2009 9:27:00 PM
another emotinal write that led to unbelivable pain. I know the feeling.
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:59:00 PM
Poignant write, Neva that evokes lots of history for me ... and now your wonderful writing is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Neva. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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