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shining lights
hide the toil of millions 
in dark alleys.
in these dark corners 
gleaming sweat of men 
cannot be differentiated
from salty vapour of sea.
the toilers are used to 
sparkle and glitter
the lives of those 
who need these lights 
to protect themselves 
from dark.
the toiling masses, 
themselves 
remain in shadows;
they get burnt as fuel 
to generate shimmer 
for others.
this fuel is infinite in supply 
for it is priced cheap.
forced to provide, perpetually
the lustre, the dazzle, for others;
keeping their own aspirations 
in shadows; and
somehow hoping 
to be redeemed, 
some day, one day.
for only this thin, 
trembling ray of hope 
is their own flicker.


5.10.2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/20/2020 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem and blessings sent your way with love, Gina
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2020 7:06:00 AM
Gina, nice to see your visit. Thanks for appreciating and your love and blessings. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/18/2020 8:46:00 PM
This poem is simply stunning, Mohan. Your potent pen brings the desperation of the toiling masses to light through the fragility of their own flicker - which is such a powerful finale to this soulful piece. Congratulations on your excellent win with this amazing poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2020 7:04:00 AM
Susan, thankyou for your liking my muse. Hope to continue to see more support from you. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/18/2020 5:35:00 AM
It is strange how your muse from old pages still holds the truth of this world. Relevant, touching and honest. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/20/2020 7:01:00 AM
sensitivity and choice of words are both important to express one's feelings to an issue. Best. Mohan
Date: 10/6/2014 4:08:00 PM
It's so interesting to see how each poet takes this topic and makes it his own. Good job on being original!!
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