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He unexpectedly lost the other half of his soul. Now he's merely an empty shell, crushed under the elephantine encumbrance of unimaginable grief. The hours are miserably long; nights are infinitely longer. He's a thousand shards of glass; crushed coarse and fine in equal measure. The coarse pieces of himself he's picked up from the asphalt. The fine remnants remain perpetually scattered every which way. He'll never be the same Crushed by grief yet he still soldiers on with life. Slowly, a smile is returning to his face and eyes. His wife's memory, his consolation. CRUSHED Poetry Contest (Winner: 4th Place) Sponsored by Anthony Biaanco Date written: 06/16/2020

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Date: 6/26/2020 3:18:00 PM
Very powerful and sadly beautiful.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/26/2020 4:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Julia:-) Your kind comments and visit mean a great deal to me!
Date: 6/18/2020 8:35:00 PM
Your golden pen is both potent and poignant, Edward. Such a sad beauty with a great last line. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/18/2020 9:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan:-) I appreciate the wondrous comments! Stay blessed. xoxo
Date: 6/18/2020 11:56:00 AM
This is a beautiful and poignant work. I enjoyed this tremendously and will fave it. I love it.... blessings and much love sent your way, my friend, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/18/2020 2:07:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and the fav, Gina:-) God bless!
Date: 6/18/2020 5:33:00 AM
A heartfelt write Edward, sad yet beautiful. I love how it ends with the consolation of memories. Congratulations on your splendid win :) Blessings my friend
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/18/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, Aditi:-)
Date: 6/18/2020 4:29:00 AM
Loss of a partner creates a vacuum that doesnot fill easily. Very well potrayed the aspect of a crushed life. Congrats. Mohan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/18/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mohan:-) I couldn't agree with you more!
Date: 6/17/2020 3:24:00 AM
Excellent use of metaphors to express the grief Edward. This should do great in the contest. xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2020 6:45:00 AM
Thank you very much, Connie:-) Most appreciated.

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