Crumby

I mailed out home-baked cookies; The recipients got crumbs. Though really, when you bite a cookie, That’s what it becomes. It wasn’t my intention, (I knew not what I was doing When I wrapped and packed the cookies) But I saved them all some chewing. Now of course, the thought’s what matters And the taste, I think, was yummy. Still, despite all of my efforts, I sent gifts considered crummy.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2017 9:43:00 PM

haha, so true this is. I used to mail cookies and found out later how they were arriving. DANG it. Hated when that happened. I used to cook many things and send out for Xmas but I stopped around 2000 because it was ruining my waistline! Love this, Ilene.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/4/2017 7:58:00 AM

If the recipients didn't appreciate your efforts they are crumbs;-) Love the "but I saved them all some chewing" - GOTD! ~ john

Doug Vinson

Date: 1/3/2017 9:19:00 PM

Ha! Cheers, Ilene. : ) Gotta say, though, that no matter how small the pieces, I'd still be eating them.