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Crowed

Crowed. when we sleep we breathe so freely because our eyes are closed; strangers try to see right through me but my eyes show them exposed; a wooden ship guides me nearly but the compass it told; a mind can think so very clearly but emotion overflowed; remembering life was so very easy when your mind was controlled; all alone isn't bright and breezy in the dark forest lost and very cold; I see a blurred light to always greet me as I awake to the bird as it gently crowed.

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Date: 9/18/2013 9:57:00 AM
Good day Peter, hummm. i find this one very clever... I think the first one is my favorite and a little creepy... cuz, if i sit and think about it... ---I wish to feel that freely feeling forever.. ALWAYS... but closing my eyes forever sounds permanent ... anyways.. I super enjoyed.. each line... Linda
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