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Crowded

A crowded subway’s like a jungle Overgrown with vines. You have to chop your way inside By various designs. You can’t use a machete Or related jungle tool. That sort of thing is frowned upon In subways, as a rule. Instead you have to push and shove To hack your way inside. A claustrophobic person Would be rather terrified. On trains in Tokyo, I read, They prod you in with poles, Like cattle to the slaughterhouse, Resigned to certain roles. Though here it isn’t quite as bad, I let some trains go by. When sardine folks glance out at me, I will not even try. But finally, I’ll brave my way And worm myself a place, Surviving as a member of This crazy human race.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/8/2012 1:49:00 PM
This was great Ilene! I have been on many crowded subway trains in my life and this certainly reminded me of them. Wonderful rhyme ...Samia
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:55:00 PM
I would love to see a chapbook of yours with just this funny stuff in it.Loved that line "sardine folks!!"
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