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Crosswise- My Lord

Your word your life your love So true so pure so free Draws near fills up attracts My soul my being my heart My soul my being my heart To walk to learn to love Your way your truths your name Today to say to pray A 17th century variation on the shape form

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Date: 2/1/2010 10:48:00 PM
Don't know how I misses this one, Brian! My congratulations on your poem winning a place in the contest! Peace, Audrey P.S. I finally got your return e-mail. Thank you, Brian for the advice! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:20:00 PM
Brian, This is a wonderful poem written in an impressive form. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:32:00 AM
You are a master of the various forms and I have learned from you. Congratulations Brian. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:24:00 AM
Man! This is a feat in many ways! Beautiful Brian and ingeniious. Congrats on your HM.-Robert
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Date: 10/26/2008 6:11:00 AM
I could never do one of these. (please don't do a contest - kidding) This takes great talent and effort, especially with such a beautiful, spiritual message. You truly are amazing. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:23:00 AM
This form amazes me, how you csan read it any-which-way...love this spirit lifting write, Brian - beautiful! Love Kristin
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Date: 10/26/2008 12:54:00 AM
Hi Brian A witty spiritual write, Love it. Also honors your faith with an open heart dedicated to Jesus and his love. Beautiful. Love Light Truth Patricia
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