Crossing the White Line



Ebony drunk  and burnt rubber   sienna swerving,
I crossed the white line ...
And tragically,
with emotional intensity,
word vehicular hit a vanilla-colored human being

My coal senses were belly dulled 
by the intoxicating,   sepia pleasure liberating pang
Released from the crowded cell ghetto chains;
brief moments of obsidian ostrich flight
was a tad sight, rice pad pedestrian

Blurred tunnel vision ... hypnotized 
by the freedom movement
of the mesmerizing, Soweto asphalt

Brother on a high-speed pace,
Indy race car accelerator celebration
Didn’t notice til it was too late — 
I crossed the white line,
and saw naked fear in the pretty doe eyes
of a bipedal, snow-tail dear

Miracle of miracles ...
Jah put a sobering brake on my
nitro-boost, Zulu soul
The near-fatal demise of
a fragile, porcelain feminine figurine
caused my chocolate lungs to scream

Still in the land of the living,
she cerulean-eye cried out for help
in tear-translated 
Afrikaner Lowland Samaritan

I shook my coconut shell pride
out of potted self-pity,
and rushed 
to provide compassionate giving

I signature crossed my Zimbabwe name
on a zebra accident report — 
the white sheet, black dotted line
And willing confessed to my
careless, ethnic insensitive crime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/27/2018 4:23:00 PM
"The near-fatal demise of a fragile, porcelain feminine figurine caused my chocolate lungs to scream"; this is an excellent piece of imagery; your word-paintings are so vibrantly meaningful, Freddie and passionate poems usually are the most effective. Well penned.
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Date: 9/27/2018 1:55:00 PM
could be one of the best slams i ever read, freddie...you are a natural social activist...hugggs
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Date: 9/27/2018 8:28:00 AM
Shazam. Your pen's groove is hoppin' my friend. Love and hugs dear Freddie, xomo
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Date: 9/27/2018 4:37:00 AM
If everyone were as cognizant of there actions and effects as you in your story this world would be a better place. Love the language my friend, keep up the great work.
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