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Croaky Frog and Furry Rat - Nursery Rhyme

In the slushy bog, lived one speckled frog He loved to have fun and didn’t wish to slog Croaky Frog was his dear name To travel and enjoy life was his aim One day he set out, wearing his hat On the way he met a furry rat He asked- “Hey rat, will you come with me Lovely scenes are there for us to see” The rat replied- “Yes, I shall come with you I too like the beautiful sights to view” Soon they saw a tabby cat on their way Rat ran in fear and hid behind some hay Croaky, instantly jumped into a well Seeing a snake in, he began to yell “Save me, save me” cried the desperate frog The evening was veiled with thick fog Billy goat and friends were grazing around They heard from the well a desperate sound In minutes, they arrived and saved the frog Thanking his friends, the frog fled to his bog Feb.28. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor- Eve Roper

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Date: 3/12/2023 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/creative write. Have a blessed day/week...............
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Date: 3/4/2023 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Valsa . Wonderful Nursery Rhyme. Eve
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Date: 3/5/2023 3:18:00 AM
Thanks a lot Eve for the contest, also for giving my poem a top win.
Date: 3/4/2023 1:54:00 PM
Back with congratulations. SK
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Date: 3/3/2023 11:54:00 PM
Haha a fun tale of abiding by rules because they are there for a reason! Very much fablesque!
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Date: 2/28/2023 8:29:00 PM
Never knew frogs lived on the edge of danger...
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Date: 2/28/2023 6:37:00 AM
Valsa, you really outdid yourself with this one; it was a joy to read. It will be really exciting for the kids. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Date: 2/28/2023 6:08:00 AM
A story for the young at heart. Cute, delightful read, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 2/28/2023 5:23:00 AM
Be alert and of sober mind. Your enemy the devil prowls around like a roaring lion looking for someone to devour. 1 Peter 5:8 NIV These tabby cats are everywhere working with the snake , but there is a friend which is there to save us from them, with a call out : ) , love your poem my dear friend, May Jesus free many from this evil cat and snake : )
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Date: 2/28/2023 2:38:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing croaky with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/28/2023 2:32:00 AM
What an amazing story, Valsa! The children will love it to bits:)
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Date: 2/28/2023 2:03:00 AM
Cute, Loved your nursery rhyme. Best for a win.
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