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Critics Twist the Knife in - Deep

Golly, gee willikers, gee whiz My punch lines have lost all their fizz ~ Where has that fizz gone It’s missing since dawn ~ Critics say: ‘Tis what ‘tis what ‘tis

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Date: 4/29/2025 2:17:00 PM
LOL. I dont think you have lost it yet Gershon
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Date: 4/28/2025 3:48:00 PM
Gee whiz you still have that Fizz BB....fun poem! Haven't heard gee willikers in quite a few years ha!! Debx
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Date: 4/28/2025 4:19:00 PM
Happy Fizzies Party, Deb. ~ Gershon
Date: 4/28/2025 10:17:00 AM
A quick battery charge will get you back up and running Gershon. Tom
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Date: 4/28/2025 5:51:00 PM
Too bad I run on electricity these days. No charging stations in sight. Hmmmm.
Date: 4/28/2025 6:05:00 AM
Hi Gershon Gee whiz - punchlines are you, they have loads of fizz, let critics say tis what tis. Blessings, Jennifer
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/28/2025 5:49:00 PM
Very nice chimey-rhymey there, Jennifer. Smiles, Gershon
Date: 4/28/2025 5:13:00 AM
just keep punchin' Gershon...ya gotta land one now and then...
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Date: 4/28/2025 5:54:00 PM
Speaking of 'punch:' Punch one for the candidate of your choice. Ponch one for the candidate of our choice. ~ Big Brother

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