Crisis In the Er

The patient's heart is out of whack His pacemaker's tick's just attacked

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Ann Foster

Date: 1/6/2020 8:27:00 PM

Oh my...prayers... Ann

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/6/2020 9:46:00 PM

Prayers heard. Thank you, Ann. Blessings, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/6/2020 3:28:00 PM

The ER is too close to comfort for me (see my page for more detail)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/6/2020 9:46:00 PM

OMG, such a scare. I get the message now, Michelle. May there be no more such scares and/or ER visits! Here's to good health and happiness! :) gw

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/6/2020 1:59:00 PM

Yikes! I think we need a sequel to find out if the patient survives. Very clever, Gershon. Love the way you set the scene in just two lines. Hugs, carolyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/6/2020 8:25:00 PM

Thanks for the in-depth comment, Carolyn, letting me know what you like, what works for you. So appreciated! Season's best, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/5/2020 10:11:00 PM

Pacemaker humor. I wish I had thought of that.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/6/2020 1:05:00 PM

Grim stuff to think about, however. :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/5/2020 9:16:00 PM

What a way to start the new year, Gershon !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2020 9:20:00 PM

Yup. Crisis in Iran. Crisis in the ER. Here a crisis, there a crisis, everywhere a... ~ Old McDonald