Crimson Slippers

Opening the doors to the old studio I find A playful capriole sprinted across my mind Into a sashay and a glissade I drifted back I could hear the teachers stick go tap.tap.tap Once a prestigious ballet school of great poise Filled with music as our slippers sounded with noise The mirrors are cracked and the floors dusty Rain soaked wood left the room smelling musty The charm stayed behind as if waiting for me Spotlighting a ballerina to The goddess of the sea The young girl danced flawlessly then took a bow Then sashayed off the stage without a moistened brow An old battered piano appeared across from me Bearing red ballet shoes like a crimson canopy Charm embraced her while honoring her memory As I looked into the mirror I saw that girl was me Carole Cookie Arnold 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/10/2011 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carole. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations Carole, on being featured this week with this lovely write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:08:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem being featured this week, Carole
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Date: 1/7/2010 9:33:00 PM
Yes, I KNEW that girl would be you. I bet you are a great dancer as well as poet. Hope you like it here as much I do since I came on about three weeks ago. Luv, andrea
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