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Crimson Sky

There’s scarlet within the warm sky tonight A crimson feel that envelopes alright I love the sight of every form of red Yellow seeps in with orange that bled World moves effortlessly along with this The colors of majestic times you wish I see the sky this dusk with awe and glee Seemingly to make me complete and free A crimson sky beams with peace and delight Sun dips into the ground and out of sight Birds recognize this beauty and dips down Reaches in the heart of the glow around Tranquil with love through the entry parlor The sky is filled with an awesome color Russell Sivey Contest: CRIMSON SKY old/new peom Sponsor: S. K. A. T. 5/12/2013

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Seren Roberts

Date: 5/26/2013 9:21:00 PM

Top spot well done Russell .....Seren

Len Gasun

Date: 5/23/2013 11:45:00 PM

This is really an outstanding write my dear friend, Russell! It'll go to my fave. It's a great honor sharing the super win with you. BIG CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU!! love and big hugs, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 9:47:00 PM

Hello, Russell ... outstanding... And I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/20/2013 9:31:00 PM

A beautiful sunset. You 'wrote' me there. Congratulations on your fabulous win. SuZ

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/20/2013 10:45:00 AM

Very well done sonnet Russel...Nothing like a beautiful sunset to end the day is there? Congratulations - Tim

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/20/2013 6:42:00 AM

congratulations on this fantastic win my friend Russell..a well deserved win...cheers!!! Maria ;)

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/19/2013 10:40:00 PM

well deserved 1st place.congrats

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/19/2013 9:29:00 PM

Whoa Russell, amazing, so much deserved to win No 1....as usual loved reading it . I never have enough reading your poems. Love Terry xoxo

Skat A

Date: 5/19/2013 9:20:00 PM

CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED, Russell :-) ~SKAT~

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2013 8:22:00 AM

I love this so much! A very very beautiful poem, form and image! Big hug for another SUPERB WRITE my dear friend Russell. Good luck and best wishes! love, Leonora

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/14/2013 7:03:00 PM

This is so beautifully written.. so tranquil and inspiring !! Sooo very, very lovely !!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/14/2013 3:24:00 AM

Amazing quill. By far worthy. Congrats on your stunning vision. You are too much Russell. Good luck bard.

Constance La France

Date: 5/13/2013 4:34:00 PM

Russell, your poem is outstanding, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry, constance

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/13/2013 2:30:00 AM

Love the Poem :) Beautiful n filled with serenity

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/12/2013 10:55:00 PM

There's an old saying: "Red sky in the morning, sailor take warning". That was quoted by the late Peter Falk in the film "The Great Race". Good poem as usual Russell.

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/12/2013 8:57:00 PM

Whoa again and again Russell, don't ever stop writing poems my friend. The way you mixed the colors is admirable, and a winner of course. Good night. Love Terry xoxo

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/12/2013 7:17:00 PM

Russell you can paint a glorious scene with your words. Your crimson sky conveyed so well. I'm happy I stopped by tonight to ready your wonderful poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2013 6:05:00 PM

I especially like the last two lines summary..Enjoyed reading your creative work..If for a contest, it should be a wiinner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/12/2013 12:07:00 PM

Just absolutely beautiful my friend! Thank you!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/12/2013 11:16:00 AM

You paint the sky with a thrill of colors as your words celebrate the beauty of the sky... a tremendous piece that you create vivid images and draw a fine picture... a pen dipped in crimson, my frined russell... greeea stuff!..:) huggs

Jack Horne

Date: 5/12/2013 9:38:00 AM

love this sonnet, my friend