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CRIMSON SKY

Prompt :"A crimson sky breaks the distant shore" Sponsor : Joseph May Submitted: 20/5/25 Placed : 4th
CRIMSON SKY A crimson Sky breaks the distant shore stargates opened veils upon veils portals portending lyrical lemon drops or so it seemed since senses were lost in open labyrinth lots angels poured purple pearls lacing comely camomile into timeless space I heard old lions roar below an empty nest though my ears gone, where was nippy nose to smell woohoo fields so fragrant with bergamot to sneeze? I who knew me was no more ego, identity, avatar were not words I had to tick in boxes ______I had become observer-listener-knower transparent as cellophane Veins and arteries slithering earthworms d a n c i ng in S k y free from flesh or blood to run graciously they murmured : ‘What is to be done, is to be done’ I remembered a text by Lenin called ‘What is to be done’ it seemed centuries ago here time had no grids, axis numbers or clocks, experiences were points on l u c i d spirals flashing tiger lilies beckoned on another byway sensations, spinning signatures along country alleys forming new Rivers of Life different degrees of L o v e which competed not with glamoured goals I realised crimson Sky lessons are taught this way facets, strings, knots were muddles for mind to untangle, create flower-of-life patterns mitochondria float below or above or omniversal, to a single destination ~ ME, I, ALL, the Imperishable ~ who gifted our offerings His frequencies, fluting cherries on top Keep facing forward said Sugarbird the journey inward proliferates doubt con fusion, p l a y hide and seek ~ disconnect these convolutions ~ narrow focus to inside locus shaped like Cullinan diamond curved _____ “ignore demons or demi-gods with malachite earrings, poppy pendants or entreaties about historical distractions” this was Silver Cloud speaking through all your winters purpose is Spring crimson Sky collapsed, distant shore dissolved a crescent moon fragment landed in my sunset H e a r t I c i r c l e d hammock with glittering crimson

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Date: 5/22/2025 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nicely done
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 5/22/2025 8:52:00 PM
ThkU for sponsorship, Joseph. Enjoyed the write. x.
Date: 5/21/2025 6:09:00 AM
ThkU 4 always finding time 2 comment, Inky. I do appreciate you, your encouraging feedback & support. Yeah ! Discovered contests can b fun, but it seems one cannot b absolutely truthful when doing them. Lotsa love to U & yours. X.
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Date: 5/21/2025 3:02:00 AM
Dear poetic soul, This is simply Beautiful! Very well written and presented too! Love the colors, vivid imagery and artistic nature of your well delivered poem! So good to see you writing for more contests! I love the ending here the most and your metaphors and use of poetic techniques as always is impressive! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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