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CRIMSON SKY

CRIMSON SKY A Crimson Sky breaks the distant shore stargates opening veils upon veils portals portending lyrical or so it seemed since senses were lost in labyrinth lots angels pouring purple pearls and comely camomile into timeless space I heard old lions roar below an empty nest though ears gone ~ I who knew me GONE ! becoming observer-listener-knower arteries slithering serpents d a n c i ng in S k y free from flesh or blood beyond Crimson Sky no grids, axis numbers or clocks, experiences points on l u c i d spirals F L A S H I N G tiger lilies beckoned on another byway sensations spinning signatures along country alleys forming R i v e r s of L i f e L o v e degrees alongside glamour goals I realised S k y lessons are mystically taught facets, strings, knots were muddles for mind to untangle, create flower-of-life patterns mitochondria floating omniversal to a single destination the Imperishable gifted His frequencies “Keep facing forward”, a whisper I heard, “the journey inward proliferates doubt confusion, p l a y s h i d e and seek narrow focus to inside locus … ignore demons or demi-gods with malachite earrings, poppy pendants or entreaties about historical distractions through all your winters purpose is S p r i n g.” Crimson Sky collapsed, distant shore dissolved a crescent moon landed in my sunset H e a r t I c i r c l e d a g l i t t e r i n g moon in my SUNSET CRIMSON SKY

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Date: 5/22/2025 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nicely done
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 5/22/2025 8:52:00 PM
ThkU for sponsorship, Joseph. Enjoyed the write. x.
Date: 5/21/2025 6:09:00 AM
ThkU 4 always finding time 2 comment, Inky. I do appreciate you, your encouraging feedback & support. Yeah ! Discovered contests can b fun, but it seems one cannot b absolutely truthful when doing them. Lotsa love to U & yours. X.
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Date: 5/21/2025 3:02:00 AM
Dear poetic soul, This is simply Beautiful! Very well written and presented too! Love the colors, vivid imagery and artistic nature of your well delivered poem! So good to see you writing for more contests! I love the ending here the most and your metaphors and use of poetic techniques as always is impressive! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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