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Crimson Marks

Winter’s hoar…frost..
has bled the maples
Crimson, marks
the torn throat of morn.

Summer’s sullen forays
have scared the natural
blush of Fall.
Would the wood recover
from the toxic fumes of man?

Radiant the sun which bombs
the atmosphere, a blight of cancer
upon the uncloaked skin…
Mutant and mutating man
warring harbinger of doom.

Where sand and soil 
and microbes had cleansed
the refuse of man waits…
clogging the arteries of bipeds
overflowing into the roots of forest
Unarmed
Rooted
Clinging 
to the seed of an apothecary life.
Feeding on the vials unturned 
draining into the Fall finery 
a mottled military camouflage
sickly green, to burnt brown emerges.

And all that’s left of life
bleeds with the maple.
Crimson, marks
the torn throat of morn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/15/2011 2:43:00 AM
I just love the way this circles back to the beginning stanza. Very good imagery, Debs. One of your very fine free verse poems.
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Date: 10/11/2011 1:46:00 AM
A very worthy write Debbie, i was enchanted to read this morning, and thank you for the helpfull comments, on the poem, i had thought being i titled it an Ode, it was probably out of context anyway..? however your comments are greatfully recived..
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Date: 10/10/2011 10:32:00 AM
Amazing descriptions to fascinate and deep meaning Debbie - perfect description of the season I love best. Thanks for posting luv
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:08:00 PM
that's some nitty gritty for ya. Many preeshes for the write, Debbie. Beauty eve to ya, namaste~N
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