Crimson

Nooses hang upon the trees,

swaying gently in the breeze.

Self loathing rips through his chest,

a raging beast which never rests.

Unseeing eyes stare through the mist,

wondering if he'll be forgotten, or missed.

His wrists are slashed, his leaves stained red,

His heart is heavy like carrying lead.

As tears come to his eyes,

his final words,

a whispered, Goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 5:59 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 31, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Vicki, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 2:22 PM
Sad and touching written poem Vicki, but well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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