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Crime Dunt Pay

Please read it how you see it.lol. Spellings not mi 4 tee tude, I dunt no rite from rong. I only borud that mistas car, An a fortneet dint seem 2 long. The coppas cum an tuck me, Thay put me in a sell. I put sum fewel in his car, So y did he av to tell. Thay tuk me to see the mista gudg, That man with funny hare. He sed that I am goin away, Al av to tek anotha car Or how will I get ther. I dint no wat he ment, He wos lokkin me away, I just cum to re a lize That crime just dusnt pay. 23/9/2021

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David Smith

Date: 10/21/2021 12:14:00 PM

You have done good and your talent shows through. Trouble is most don't get message early enough re crime. I grew up in an era when children were deterred from starting a career in crime by community policing and watchful parents. Hope all is well with you and your family. Best regards David in NZ

Simon Hamill
Date: 10/21/2021 4:30:00 PM

Hi david.i think kids nowadays get away with to much.when I was a lad e would get a clip around the ear,and another when we got home.take care.simon.:-)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/27/2021 4:51:00 PM

Hello Simon ... your poem highlights the reason why the English language is so hard to learn, and it fully deserves to be in the funny section indeed - thanks Simon - Lindsay

Simon Hamill
Date: 9/28/2021 3:02:00 AM

Hi Lindsay,it was just a bit of fun to write.but it was hard typing it out.lol.all the best.simon

Emilia James

Date: 9/23/2021 10:05:00 AM

lol very good, it's like reading another language. A clever and fun write. Enjoyed very much. Thank you Simon. Emilia : )

Simon Hamill
Date: 9/23/2021 5:50:00 PM

Thanks emilia.its a little hard to read but it was fun.take care.:-):-)