Simon Hamill Poet Rhyme

Crime Dunt Pay

Please read it how you see it.lol.

Spellings not mi 4 tee tude,
I dunt no rite from rong.
I only borud that mistas car,
An a fortneet dint seem 2 long.

The coppas cum an tuck me,
Thay put me in a sell.
I put sum fewel in his car,
So y did he av to tell.

Thay tuk me to see the mista gudg,
That man with funny hare.
He sed that I am goin away,
Al av to tek anotha car
Or how will I get ther.

I dint no wat he ment,
He wos lokkin me away,
I just cum to re a lize
That crime just dusnt pay.

23/9/2021

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David Smith October 21, 2021 at 12:14 PM You have done good and your talent shows through. Trouble is most don't get message early enough re crime. I grew up in an era when children were deterred from starting a career in crime by community policing and watchful parents. Hope all is well with you and your family. Best regards David in NZ Simon Hamill October 21, 2021 at 4:30 PM Hi david.i think kids nowadays get away with to much.when I was a lad e would get a clip around the ear,and another when we got home.take care.simon.:-)

Lindsay Laurie September 27, 2021 at 4:51 PM Hello Simon ... your poem highlights the reason why the English language is so hard to learn, and it fully deserves to be in the funny section indeed - thanks Simon - Lindsay Simon Hamill September 28, 2021 at 3:02 AM Hi Lindsay,it was just a bit of fun to write.but it was hard typing it out.lol.all the best.simon

Emilia James September 23, 2021 at 10:05 AM lol very good, it's like reading another language. A clever and fun write. Enjoyed very much. Thank you Simon. Emilia : ) Simon Hamill September 23, 2021 at 5:50 PM Thanks emilia.its a little hard to read but it was fun.take care.:-):-)