Cricket In My House - Part 2

I want to entrap him to set him free But how do you catch what you just can't see I come near the sound Yet when I'm around His PEEP becomes mute as a sand flea!!
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Smart little cricket!
George   Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 1:14 PM
lol! how true. Love this limerick, Judith. Elaine
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November 9, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Thanks for reading Elaine :) Best, Judy
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:27 PM
I like this one even better than part one. So cute.
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November 6, 2017 at 7:05 PM
Awh ... thanks Andrea!! :) Best, Judy
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Makes me glad we don't have crickets I much prefer some things to remain silent:-) hugs jan xx
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November 6, 2017 at 11:35 AM
Yes Jan. Crickets are really lovely when all together they join their voices and create a soothing background in the outdoors at night. It's actually very lulling to fall asleep to with the windows open. But when one becomes separated from the rest and gets in your house!!! They are completely annoying!! lol Thanks for reading. Best, Judy
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November 6, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Haha! so true... There are loads of them hiding away...
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November 6, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Yes! Once they are in your house ... they are very sneaky and like to hide. If you put a light on them, they stop making noise. But they hide behind absolutely anything and don't want to be caught! Thanks for reading SO. Best, Judy
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Good insight--a lovely limerick!
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November 6, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Thaks Vijay :) Best, Judy
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