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Crevices

A wall impenetrable failure's entrance moist eyes note not the crevices Ever-present darkness, daylight concrete pierced with whispers Matter's essence distills eventualities

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Date: 12/6/2023 5:48:00 PM
The crevices are much more whisper friendly than the wise cracks. You saying. You said a lot here, gw, your wisdom seeps through. BB
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Date: 12/4/2023 12:18:00 PM
concrete pierced with whispers …
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Date: 12/4/2023 4:36:00 AM
I loved the wisdom within your words, Gershon. I especially liked the 2d verse and the hope of daylight piercing the darkness. Well done, Sir. Have a splendid day, Sara
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