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Crescent Shadow

In my cup of tea Crescent shadows of the moon The hibiscus blooms _________________________________

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/19/2017 10:44:00 AM

I love hibiscus tea with a swirl of crescent moon shadow--a delightful haiku Probir! I enjoyed your very appealing poem this morning!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2017 2:22:00 PM

- Enjoy your tea in the moonlight, Probir :) - Beautiful scent of hibiscus :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/14/2017 6:05:00 AM

What a pleasant read poem. I love the flow of this poem. Excellent one.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/13/2017 5:39:00 AM

I love hibiscus, I like tea and adore your Haiku dear friend, Probir! Where are you?

Darren White

Date: 8/13/2017 5:37:00 AM

That is a fantastic cup of tea, and so fragrant. Well written :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2017 6:55:00 PM

Good work Probir.. well put in a beautiful Haiku!

Lin Lane

Date: 8/12/2017 10:14:00 AM

Your cup of tea is alluring to the imagination. Sweet hibiscus blooms in your write, Probir.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2017 10:00:00 AM

Nice Haiku Probir. :)