Crescent Mouth

Sing the rites of evening’s passage when bleeding moon fires like a wild keeper, her rosette curves slither in rarest of eclipse as night sky heaves with quivering breaths. Oh how she bares the lush of glossed flesh beckoning all senses to crave her touch; more red than any pigment of glazed stars while crescent mouth foretells her swift plight. Chant! blood of moon curdles in hungry desire igniting lovers to taste life’s ambrosia; brief her presence dripping sweet mysticism… till passion brews before hours nip her spell.
........................ Dave Wood's Red Moon 4/ 15/ 2014 by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Martin Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:05 PM
I can see why this poem took home the prize--very sumptuous, elegant and enticing. Great work.
Devonshire Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 1:34 PM
Great imagery, Nette. Congrats on your win, Carolyn
Deschler Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 11:51 AM
I am always enchanted when reading your exquisite poetry, Nette! This was a very passionate and magical write on the subject of the red moon. Congratulations on your first place win!
Hamilton Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 9:30 AM
brilliant pen Nette congrats on win hugs
Mehta Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, nette
Peterson Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Nette, you write with such elegance and grace. Congratulations on achieving the top spot. You have tapped into a certain wellspring that lends supernal majesty to your verse.
Torres Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Congrats on your win ,nette!! ..such elegance and passion combined in your piece... very lovely!!! kudos~~~ :O))
Rodgers Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Lovely and evocative, congrats on your win
Brk  Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 11:36 PM
Unbelievably eloquent!
A. Sharma Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Amazingly beautiful Nette ! beyond my imagination goes this write,,i found it real tough,,, seems how easy u tuk this one wid a wonderful flow thru'out ! congrats on great win !
Jerden Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Congratulations, Nette. Like another language entirely.
Richards Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:31 PM
There is no one who can match your glorious use of language.....and make each word sound breathless as this.. I am honored to share a spot with your talent! Congrats to you Nette!
Walker  Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:16 PM
beautiful, congrats... Verlena
Nance Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:13 PM
beautiful, congrats :)
Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:07 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
Mohn Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Crazy good...congrats
Johnson Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:24 PM
A well deserving big no. 1. Congratualtions Nette. Love, Joyce.
Sirak Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Vibrant and sensual! I am always amazed at the way you weave lush images into a beautiful language.
Peterson Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 2:47 PM
I love poems inspired by nature, especially ones dealing with skyward phenomena. The words are engaging and lush. Thanks for inviting me on this wondrous journey.
Smith Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:22 AM
Beautiful picture you painted nette while being sensuous....hugs Tim
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 7:30 AM
- Not just beautiful ..... but .... Just Gorgeous, dear Nette!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 4:55 AM
Awesome sensual and romantic expressions, nette
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 4:25 AM
Free verse at its best. Sensual and romantic. Hunger for lusty love. Pity the night has to turn to day, eventually :) // paul
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 5:37 PM
back again nette .... this time with congratulations on a deserved top win. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:51 AM
passionately described and compared as always.. :) though i need a dictionary again for lil help.. :D love learning with you.. :) --- olive eloisa.. ;) I'm excited to read a mail from you but unfortunately I did not received any.. :O :(
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Gorgeous, Nette. Unlike any other red moon poem I have seen!!
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