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Sing the rites of evening’s passage when bleeding moon fires like a wild keeper, her rosette curves slither in rarest of eclipse as night sky heaves with quivering breaths. Oh how she bares the lush of glossed flesh beckoning all senses to crave her touch; more red than any pigment of glazed stars while crescent mouth foretells her swift plight. Chant! blood of moon curdles in hungry desire igniting lovers to taste life’s ambrosia; brief her presence dripping sweet mysticism… till passion brews before hours nip her spell.
........................ Dave Wood's Red Moon 4/ 15/ 2014 by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/8/2014 12:05:00 PM
I can see why this poem took home the prize--very sumptuous, elegant and enticing. Great work.
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Date: 5/10/2014 1:34:00 PM
Great imagery, Nette. Congrats on your win, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2014 11:51:00 AM
I am always enchanted when reading your exquisite poetry, Nette! This was a very passionate and magical write on the subject of the red moon. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:30:00 AM
brilliant pen Nette congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:55:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:50:00 AM
Nette, you write with such elegance and grace. Congratulations on achieving the top spot. You have tapped into a certain wellspring that lends supernal majesty to your verse.
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win ,nette!! ..such elegance and passion combined in your piece... very lovely!!! kudos~~~ :O))
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:20:00 AM
Lovely and evocative, congrats on your win
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Date: 5/6/2014 11:36:00 PM
Unbelievably eloquent!
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Date: 5/6/2014 10:31:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful Nette ! beyond my imagination goes this write,,i found it real tough,,, seems how easy u tuk this one wid a wonderful flow thru'out ! congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/6/2014 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette. Like another language entirely.
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:31:00 PM
There is no one who can match your glorious use of language.....and make each word sound breathless as this.. I am honored to share a spot with your talent! Congrats to you Nette!
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:16:00 PM
beautiful, congrats... Verlena
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:13:00 PM
beautiful, congrats :)
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:07:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:03:00 PM
Crazy good...congrats
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:24:00 PM
A well deserving big no. 1. Congratualtions Nette. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 4/27/2014 5:30:00 AM
Vibrant and sensual! I am always amazed at the way you weave lush images into a beautiful language.
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Date: 4/21/2014 2:47:00 PM
I love poems inspired by nature, especially ones dealing with skyward phenomena. The words are engaging and lush. Thanks for inviting me on this wondrous journey.
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Date: 4/20/2014 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful picture you painted nette while being sensuous....hugs Tim
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Date: 4/20/2014 7:30:00 AM
- Not just beautiful ..... but .... Just Gorgeous, dear Nette!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:55:00 AM
Awesome sensual and romantic expressions, nette
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:25:00 AM
Free verse at its best. Sensual and romantic. Hunger for lusty love. Pity the night has to turn to day, eventually :) // paul
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Date: 5/6/2014 5:37:00 PM
back again nette .... this time with congratulations on a deserved top win. // paul
Date: 4/20/2014 12:51:00 AM
passionately described and compared as always.. :) though i need a dictionary again for lil help.. :D love learning with you.. :) --- olive eloisa.. ;) I'm excited to read a mail from you but unfortunately I did not received any.. :O :(
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Date: 4/19/2014 10:35:00 PM
Gorgeous, Nette. Unlike any other red moon poem I have seen!!
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