Crescent Mourning

At twilight I sang 
through veils of darkness,
as moon turned heads
with her crescent mourning,
and yesterdays permeate
within this etherized rhythm,
the metronome swung
a lifetime within a crescendo, 
violet tears seeped octaves
and feel distantly,
to move in life


and shivers took hold


in old lanes paved 
with tears of stone,
streets littered with 
tissues of newspaper,
blowing to roll
as a string of 
breath past,
dustbins filled with organs
necessary removals of survival,
now
breathe with life again


amethyst and gold leaf,
press all roads of now
to rain, 
with feathers of faith


with the debris of horror
gasping at routes end,
a mercy,  
street-sweepers cleared 
to guard
waiting for the call
to a final reckoning 


now as midnight chants,
striking 
every memory of horror!,
crushing each torture!
till,
they are nevermore


I sing with amethyst ether
tendril-ed from my lips,
and I forgive them all
in one breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/11/2009 8:29:00 AM
Gosh, you have blossomed, flowered into goodness ...my perfect poem tree.
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Date: 12/10/2009 10:54:00 AM
This one has blown me away Jayne, its great to see your work starting to get comments " where have all the commevtors been " >> James
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Date: 12/9/2009 8:42:00 PM
Wow, Catie is right, Jayne. Your talent shines in this brilliant write! Awesome work -- enchanting. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2009 8:18:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 12/8/2009 7:28:00 PM
Awesome inspiration you are Jayne, you have a unique word placement flow. I love, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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