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Credible Witness

the doorbell footage tells me I am looking good and I believe it

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Paul Willason

Date: 3/14/2024 2:15:00 AM

A mind stopping little poem, catching an ordinary moment and elevating it into the memorable.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/14/2024 11:26:00 AM

Thanks Paul, we are captured in so many places these days but don't always register the person passing by. I appreciate your comment x

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/13/2024 1:11:00 PM

It’s catching all your best angles Dilly, this one is quite unique, were you going back over the footage checking for intruders and caught yourself sneaking back in after a night out lol! Wow so many ways to interpret this one if you think deeply enough about it, fun senryu just like they should be, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/13/2024 3:56:00 PM

Still raining here too, I think it’s to stop on Saturday, you would think in this day and age they would’ve invented some waterproof force field for ladies hair, lol!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/13/2024 1:57:00 PM

You know I did check back to see what I looked like a couple of months ago but didn't think to check the night out ones haha! I must do that. I chanced doing my hair and make up despite the rain and I've lost noticeable weight. It's usually cruel but today was kind :)