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Creation's Spiral

Creations Spiral Life’s tangible presence vibrations variant soft rumbling timpani one place with one accord awakening to truth #2 – union with higher self John G. Lawless 7/7/2015 submitted to – MISTIQUE – poetry contest sponsor – Nette Onclaud

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/7/2015 6:08:00 PM

Captivating John! It is a wonderful entry!

Constance La France

Date: 7/7/2015 5:47:00 PM

John, love your spiritual write, wonderful for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my spirit poem and for spotting that mistake, so appreciate, you are the best sort of sad to loose that last line "crystal clear awareness"

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2015 5:22:00 PM

Very creative John and I love the alliteration in line 2:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 7/7/2015 5:36:00 PM

Thanks Jan, my attempt to describe my quest for a spiritual "solution" in my live always seem to lead me further into the abyss.