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Creation of the Universe and Man

Was the universe
ever beautiful?
Who lived in this void
without form and air...
did God have a plan?

Jehovah and
the Word began
creating with
a loud command.

The Heavens
soon appeared 
and dazzled.  


Adam
rose from

dust.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2010 12:45:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/25/2010 10:02:00 AM Congratulations Andrew on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/15/2010 6:21:00 PM Congratulations Andrew on your poem's worthy placement in second place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/2/2010 5:45:00 AM direct and to a point! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love Login to Reply

Kurt Kohls Date: 9/24/2010 12:31:00 AM Andrew, congrats on your fine win here enjoyed the read,,,tks peace, Kurt Login to Reply

Heidi Scherber Date: 9/19/2010 11:58:00 AM Enjoyed the read. Congratulations, definitely earned the win with this piece. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/18/2010 2:20:00 PM Congrad's on your win! ever wonder if no one was there to see it happen why we assume it happened this way? Light & Love (The ole tree falling in the forest and no one to hear it?) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/17/2010 12:47:00 PM Congratulations on this wonderful win, Andrew Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 9/17/2010 8:53:00 AM A wonderful write, congratulations in your second place win. Caryl Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 9/17/2010 7:41:00 AM lovely, congrats on your win Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/17/2010 6:40:00 AM Congratulations on your win Andrew in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 9/16/2010 8:41:00 PM Congrats on a very good second place poem. Charles Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/16/2010 8:31:00 PM very moving this, congrats on this winning entry. Harry Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/16/2010 8:14:00 PM Congrtulations on 2nd place ~~ Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/16/2010 3:29:00 PM enjoyed reading today! congrats on the win! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/16/2010 3:12:00 PM Congrats Andrew on your big win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend..enjoy your top spot..with luv.. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/16/2010 2:28:00 PM I love it..conrats on your big win! BG Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/16/2010 1:20:00 PM Andrew congratulations on your awesome win in Rick's contest ;) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/16/2010 1:14:00 PM Congratulation's Andrew on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/16/2010 12:35:00 PM Big congrats on taking second place in Rick's contest, Andrew! Enjoyed your poem just as much on the second reading. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/16/2010 12:25:00 PM A wonderful view of the creation! Well done, Andrew! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/10/2010 12:23:00 PM What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Andrew. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/10/2010 7:10:00 AM Andrew, we see the entire story of creation through your spiritual poem. Very unique approach and a superb entry for the contest. I think Rick will love this one! Soup mail in a moment, but best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/10/2010 5:02:00 AM Nicely composed Hexaverse on the theme of the Universe, Andrew. Good luck in the contest, Login to Reply