Andrew Crisci Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Creation of the Universe and Man

Was the universe
ever beautiful?
Who lived in this void
without form and air...
did God have a plan?

Jehovah and
the Word began
creating with
a loud command.

The Heavens
soon appeared 
and dazzled.  


Adam
rose from

dust.

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Sara Kendrick October 28, 2010 at 12:45 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown October 25, 2010 at 10:02 AM Congratulations Andrew on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman October 15, 2010 at 6:21 PM Congratulations Andrew on your poem's worthy placement in second place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi October 2, 2010 at 5:45 AM direct and to a point! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Kurt Kohls September 24, 2010 at 12:31 AM Andrew, congrats on your fine win here enjoyed the read,,,tks peace, Kurt

Heidi Scherber September 19, 2010 at 11:58 AM Enjoyed the read. Congratulations, definitely earned the win with this piece.

Debbie Guzzi September 18, 2010 at 2:20 PM Congrad's on your win! ever wonder if no one was there to see it happen why we assume it happened this way? Light & Love (The ole tree falling in the forest and no one to hear it?)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2010 at 12:47 PM Congratulations on this wonderful win, Andrew

Caryl Muzzey September 17, 2010 at 8:53 AM A wonderful write, congratulations in your second place win. Caryl

Francine Roberts September 17, 2010 at 7:41 AM lovely, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown September 17, 2010 at 6:40 AM Congratulations on your win Andrew in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Charles Henderson September 16, 2010 at 8:41 PM Congrats on a very good second place poem. Charles

Harry Horsman September 16, 2010 at 8:31 PM very moving this, congrats on this winning entry. Harry

Constance La France September 16, 2010 at 8:14 PM Congrtulations on 2nd place ~~

Doris Culverhouse September 16, 2010 at 3:29 PM enjoyed reading today! congrats on the win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 16, 2010 at 3:12 PM Congrats Andrew on your big win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend..enjoy your top spot..with luv..

Barbara Gorelick September 16, 2010 at 2:28 PM I love it..conrats on your big win! BG

Wilma Neels September 16, 2010 at 1:20 PM Andrew congratulations on your awesome win in Rick's contest ;)

James Fraser September 16, 2010 at 1:14 PM Congratulation's Andrew on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2010 at 12:35 PM Big congrats on taking second place in Rick's contest, Andrew! Enjoyed your poem just as much on the second reading. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards September 16, 2010 at 12:25 PM A wonderful view of the creation! Well done, Andrew! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown September 10, 2010 at 12:23 PM What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Andrew. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire September 10, 2010 at 7:10 AM Andrew, we see the entire story of creation through your spiritual poem. Very unique approach and a superb entry for the contest. I think Rick will love this one! Soup mail in a moment, but best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta September 10, 2010 at 5:02 AM Nicely composed Hexaverse on the theme of the Universe, Andrew. Good luck in the contest,