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Creation of the Universe and Man

Was the universe ever beautiful? Who lived in this void without form and air... did God have a plan? Jehovah and the Word began creating with a loud command. The Heavens soon appeared and dazzled. Adam rose from dust.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2010 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:02:00 AM

Congratulations Andrew on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 6:21:00 PM

Congratulations Andrew on your poem's worthy placement in second place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/2/2010 5:45:00 AM

direct and to a point! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Kurt Kohls

Date: 9/24/2010 12:31:00 AM

Andrew, congrats on your fine win here enjoyed the read,,,tks peace, Kurt

Heidi Scherber

Date: 9/19/2010 11:58:00 AM

Enjoyed the read. Congratulations, definitely earned the win with this piece.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/18/2010 2:20:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! ever wonder if no one was there to see it happen why we assume it happened this way? Light & Love (The ole tree falling in the forest and no one to hear it?)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on this wonderful win, Andrew

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 8:53:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations in your second place win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:41:00 AM

lovely, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrew in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/16/2010 8:41:00 PM

Congrats on a very good second place poem. Charles

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/16/2010 8:31:00 PM

very moving this, congrats on this winning entry. Harry

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 8:14:00 PM

Congrtulations on 2nd place ~~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/16/2010 3:29:00 PM

enjoyed reading today! congrats on the win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 3:12:00 PM

Congrats Andrew on your big win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend..enjoy your top spot..with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2010 2:28:00 PM

I love it..conrats on your big win! BG

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2010 1:20:00 PM

Andrew congratulations on your awesome win in Rick's contest ;)

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2010 1:14:00 PM

Congratulation's Andrew on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 12:35:00 PM

Big congrats on taking second place in Rick's contest, Andrew! Enjoyed your poem just as much on the second reading. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/16/2010 12:25:00 PM

A wonderful view of the creation! Well done, Andrew! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 12:23:00 PM

What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Andrew. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2010 7:10:00 AM

Andrew, we see the entire story of creation through your spiritual poem. Very unique approach and a superb entry for the contest. I think Rick will love this one! Soup mail in a moment, but best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2010 5:02:00 AM

Nicely composed Hexaverse on the theme of the Universe, Andrew. Good luck in the contest,