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Creation Colours

Flowers with colours enchant me, Buds budding and blooming, Beauty surrounds, fills me with glee, Nature’s way of grooming; Looking around, I stand in awe of God in creation, I want to dance and shout hurrah! Such is heart’s elation! Syllable count: 8.6.8.6 06.23.2021

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/25/2021 8:47:00 AM

Hi JO WHAT A fabulous write,,,zowie, Sunshine wishes Pangie xx

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/23/2021 9:29:00 PM

Hello Jo, Looks like the flower fields nearby. No adjectives that I see in your colorful write.., though maybe a dangling participle. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2021 6:34:00 AM

- Beautiful poem ... beautiful flowers :) - Best wishes in the contest, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/23/2021 5:39:00 AM

I checked the poem with an app called nounshoun which told such is an adjective. Your poem is beautiful. All the best for contest

Joanna Daniel
Date: 6/23/2021 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Rama, but here such is used as a pronoun:)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/23/2021 5:21:00 AM

This is a beauty, Jo. No easy task, writing without adjectives. Good luck.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/23/2021 3:23:00 AM

Not an an easy task Jo, trouble with some words is sometimes words can be adjectives sometimes not. Best of luck in the contest Tom

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2021 2:28:00 AM

Beautiful.

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/23/2021 2:28:00 AM

lol at you asking for readers to be editing eyes. I know how difficult it is NOT to use adjectives. I read my entry so many times and still found one, so I may be disqualified if I missed another. Lovely lines and what a photo. To see a field of flowers such as the one you used...unforgettable!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/23/2021 1:15:00 AM

Well composed. Best for a win.