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Created, the Monster

Created came with the pieces from others Creator, he became the monster Created had no form but learned quickly from others Love that was instinct became over shadowed Replaced, made worst to others Creator abandoned Ashamed became Not of deserved self But shame and fury for what others called a monster He laments his own hands and condemns his brother Not just one but all the others Created runs from sins Learned, not to lean on others Commits murder for no sake but desperation Rage at forsaken All others suffer But worst Creator

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/6/2014 2:18:00 PM
Great poem Becc, i like the epic thoughts here... I think I will read it again... , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:35:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Becc:) - I choose your first very well written poem - Like it !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2014 2:54:00 AM
Veey deep Becc, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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