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Written on March 27, 2024

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She asked him where he’d been. He said she was crazy for questioning him. She asked him why he stayed gone. He assured her it was better to be alone. She asked him when he’d be home. He reminded her he was never wrong. She asked him who left the lipstick on his collar. He told her a lie about the stain being her color. She asked him how long he’d been lying. He swore that their love wasn’t dying. She asked him which smile he’d been faking, He sighed, silent as the darkness forsaking. She asked him and he never truly answered. Because, without a doubt, his love was synthetic. Love this phony – it’s like saying that baloney, Is ham or steak… It’s a story, taller than any tale yet told, By the heart who, though it is made of gold, Knows the tale is just a fable to unfold, A fable meant to keep feelings believing, In a love that is destined to see through, revealing All the lies that one heart is using, to convince another, To keep letting him abuse her, With the stories that are made up to confuse her. He tells her she’s crazy and she believes she is, Knowing she’s crazy… because she’s still in love with him.

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Date: 4/1/2024 12:27:00 AM
A good description of a bad relationship. Well done.
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Date: 3/27/2024 6:40:00 PM
A brilliant poem about toxic relationships, Regina.
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Date: 3/27/2024 4:50:00 PM
I felt twinges of sadness as I read your poem, Gina. A woman loving a man with 'synthetic love' resonated with me. You captured the abuse, the neglect, and the painful reality of a truly destructive and toxic relationship. Your poem was beyond captivating. Such a talent you have!! Enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/27/2024 1:51:00 PM
Your poem exposes the hollowness of the man's love, depicting it as nothing more than a facade designed to manipulate and control. The final lines poignantly capture the woman's internal conflict, as she wrestles with the painful reality of her situation while still clinging to a love that is ultimately destructive. Overall, this poem is a compelling exploration of the complexities of love and deception, shining a light on the often-hidden realities of toxic relationships.
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