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Craving You Again


lavender lingers in my essence- fearing not fear, seeking only love; my depth wears your strength, your presence- rainbows whisper soft crimson hues; for I am but a mortal craving your core, as- you yearn for my muse
September 23, 2019

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Date: 9/24/2019 5:42:00 AM
Ah Laura another winner I see! A gorgeous write!;) do I congratulate you now or wait? Lol! Ok I will be back then!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 4:33:00 PM
Lol who could forget this form? Haha! I may have to try my hand at it but don't hold your breath!;) may be more than I can do! Lol! But I will remember it! ;) still loving this!;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2019 9:13:00 AM
thank you! Read Edward's comment, too funny. :) -luloo
Date: 9/23/2019 6:16:00 PM
Such an exquisite Yalto, Luloo!:-) You've mastered it, for sure. I also loved "Transcending Hope." Good luck in the contest!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/24/2019 1:40:00 PM
You're welcome, Luloo:-) And you needn't worry. There's no doubt in my mind "Transcending Hope" will be a winner! I look forward to more great Yalto poems from you!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2019 9:12:00 AM
thank you for that! I am honored. Funny story- Can you believe I already wrote one for this contest back on 9-3? I totally forgot. Who forgets such a hard form? ME. Anyways, I tried to delete my entry and enter this one but it was too late. If you are interested in the other one I wrote with your amazing form, it's called "Transcending Hope" on 9-3. So, we will see! I liked this one better too! lol :) -luloo
Date: 9/23/2019 9:53:00 AM
This is awesome. I enjoyed reading and wish you well in the contest. Blessings
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2019 9:10:00 AM
thank you dear Regina :)-luloo
Date: 9/23/2019 9:51:00 AM
I am not familiar with the form but I like the result. I enjoyed this delicate piece. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2019 9:52:00 AM
So funny, I see Sandra used the same descriptor.
Date: 9/23/2019 9:45:00 AM
i love this my friend...such soft delicate images yet the ending makes quite an impact...not familiar with this form but it wears your words well... :) hugs
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