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Craigie Manor

Within the Craigie Mile a manor house stands
Under sheeted rain and surrounded by shrouding fog
One night as Hell sang in the sky
A lady did run along the Craigie mile
Where she was she had no clue
The fog was so thick it shrouded all
She was a bedraggled soul in a world of gloom
Her world was grey and resonated thunder
Clothes soaked through clinging to her body
Ahead and to her left she thought she saw a glint of light
It was a light and it grew stronger

Out of the fog a Manor house emerged
What eyes watching this bedraggled soul
In each window a lantern lighted
A great white Heaven within this Hell
To the great wooden door her legs did take her
The great metal lion knocker smiled at her
Bang Bang Bang
The knocks seemed to reverberate through this haven
Feet moved towards the door from within
The door opened and there stood a young woman holding a lantern
She motioned the young lady inside
When she entered the house keeper closed the door 

The young lady was taken to a bedroom
There upon the bed a scarlet gown
The young housekeeper telling her to change her wet things 
A fire leapt warmth from the fireplace on the far wall 
Towels also were layed upon the bed
She removed her clothes drying herself with the towels
She stood by the fire smiling
She put on the red gown and looked at herself in a full mirror
She did smile at the beauty before her eyes

She knew this was the dinner gong
Picking up a lantern from a table she walked out the door
Along a great hall portraits were hung
The house seemed different now
An oppressive feeling did come over her
Each face she passed smiling at her
She walked by a door
The door opened
A scream filled the night
A skeletal hand gripped her arm
She tried to pull away
The grip was too strong

She walked down the grand staircase
This aberration escorting her
She was led to the seat of the mistress
Sitting she looked around the table
Skeleton's in all levels of putrescence 
Before them the meal
All that slithered in their graves upon the table
On the plate before her human organs
The other guests began to eat

The final horror
The master of the manner took his seat
Lucifer himself
She had found the De'il's mile
He sat at the head of the table
Up she did jump
She ran out into the night
The De'il's words ringing in her ears
We shall finish our dinner at a later date.
Another found on the De'il's Mile
Lost deep within her mind
In a Sanitorium she now does wait
Waiting to share the De'il's feast

08/01/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/21/2019 10:18:00 PM
I love a good ghost story and this one, with its eerie atmosphere, just lured me in right from the beginning... Very, very good work Mike!
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Date: 2/4/2019 9:07:00 PM
The moment that woman went into the manor I was yelling in my head, "Don't go, girl, don't go inside!" and I course she went in and I dreaded what was going to happen. This was an awesome ride and creepy ride.
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Date: 1/17/2019 6:23:00 PM
I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/13/2019 10:06:00 AM
Oh my, it's no wonder she ended up in a sanitorium. (This would make an excellent short story too! Something like Poe would write.) If this is for the haunted mansion contest, it should do very well! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/13/2019 10:24:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Being free-verse, it is not for the contest. I think it shall be a part of my Craigie Mile or De'ils Mile epic. I can't remember which one it is at this moment. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 1/9/2019 1:38:00 PM
This is very scary, dark and chilly, Mike; ideal to be read after midnight! She ran away from the manor house, but not from the fear that was to haunt her all her life. Regards to you, my friend. // paul
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/10/2019 6:45:00 AM
Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Craigie write, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The Craigie is another epic I am thinking of writing. This poem was just a trial on a part of the poem within the manor. She shall remain ever trapped within the Craigie. have a wonderful wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 1/8/2019 9:16:00 PM
oooh deep shades of Hotel California here!! Spooky and wonderfully pictured for us. If it's for that one contest, I think that one needs to be rhymed. Anyway, great story telling.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/9/2019 1:08:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the common this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the write. This was not written for the contest. I am thinking of making this a part of my Craigie Mile epic. There shall be more things taking place. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 1/8/2019 2:23:00 PM
This is a very spooky story my friend..you have a vibrant imagination. I didn't expect that ending. Well written tale, Mike.
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Date: 1/9/2019 11:38:00 AM
Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. This may be a part of my Craigie Mile epic that I am thinking of starting. The De'il's Manor stands on the De'il's Mile. Only madness is found on the Craigie. have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 1/8/2019 11:44:00 AM
A haunting tale filled with mystery and imagery that chills the bones Mike! Brilliantly written! I loved it. I hope you enter it in the contest. Have a great week my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/9/2019 11:17:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. As this is not Rhyme it shall not be in the contest. Just trying out some words for my craigie epic which I shall start posting sometime. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

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