Coyote Tears

It’s cold here in Central Texas
Winter has laid its hand upon us
The night is clean and pure
With just a whisper of oak and mesquite fires
Burning on the hilltops 
And villages of old German hopes
The coyotes are calling
Packs move in the night
Instinctive without knowing the reason
They find their way into town
Old men with rifles sit on porches waiting
But nearly always miss
For winter is the friend of the coyote
And the bones of men
Are appendages meant for warmer climates
Civilized cravings or hunger drives them here
Or maybe it’s just an Comanche tear
That fell in this place 
And stained the ground forever
What ever it is I welcome them here
For they are clean and pure
Of what burdens men
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Collins Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:40 AM
I agree with Karen - "For they are clean...." sums it up as nothing else could. There are so many snippets of writer's talent within this beauty of a poem. Animals do what they do with no regrets. Instinctive like you say. More, Kilmer, more.
Kilmer Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 4:21 PM
thanks Kathy. I alway look forward to hearing from you. Your comments are spot on. Thank you for the compliments. It means a lot to me. ~Kilmer
Anglesey Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Well done with moving and profound sentiment. Great lines all the way through. Excellent last lines, "For they are clean and pure Of what burdens men.". This is a truly amazing masterpiece. Going in my faves :)
Kilmer Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Your the best. Thanks for the kind comments. I started off with nothing and ended up with more than I realized. ~Kilmer
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Enjoyed the write on winter, Stephen
Kilmer Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta. I am always eager to hear your comments. ~Kilmer
Breidenthal Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 10:03 PM
This is filled with brilliance. Those that lines are very touching. Always, Laura
Kilmer Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Your too kind. Thank you Laura, as always it's good to hear from you. ~Kilmer
Gorelick Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 8:53 PM
This is a stunning piece. I loved every line. BG
Kilmer Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Thanks Barbara, always good to hear from you. Always, ~Kilmer
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