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Coyote Tears

It’s cold here in Central Texas Winter has laid its hand upon us The night is clean and pure With just a whisper of oak and mesquite fires Burning on the hilltops And villages of old German hopes The coyotes are calling Packs move in the night Instinctive without knowing the reason They find their way into town Old men with rifles sit on porches waiting But nearly always miss For winter is the friend of the coyote And the bones of men Are appendages meant for warmer climates Civilized cravings or hunger drives them here Or maybe it’s just an Comanche tear That fell in this place And stained the ground forever What ever it is I welcome them here For they are clean and pure Of what burdens men

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 9:40:00 AM
I agree with Karen - "For they are clean...." sums it up as nothing else could. There are so many snippets of writer's talent within this beauty of a poem. Animals do what they do with no regrets. Instinctive like you say. More, Kilmer, more.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 12/13/2013 4:21:00 PM
thanks Kathy. I alway look forward to hearing from you. Your comments are spot on. Thank you for the compliments. It means a lot to me. ~Kilmer
Date: 12/10/2013 11:19:00 AM
Well done with moving and profound sentiment. Great lines all the way through. Excellent last lines, "For they are clean and pure Of what burdens men.". This is a truly amazing masterpiece. Going in my faves :)
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 12/10/2013 6:46:00 PM
Your the best. Thanks for the kind comments. I started off with nothing and ended up with more than I realized. ~Kilmer
Date: 12/10/2013 8:13:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on winter, Stephen
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 12/10/2013 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta. I am always eager to hear your comments. ~Kilmer
Date: 12/9/2013 10:03:00 PM
This is filled with brilliance. Those that lines are very touching. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 12/10/2013 6:44:00 PM
Your too kind. Thank you Laura, as always it's good to hear from you. ~Kilmer
Date: 12/9/2013 8:53:00 PM
This is a stunning piece. I loved every line. BG
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 12/10/2013 6:43:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, always good to hear from you. Always, ~Kilmer

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